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Nov 27, 2008 02:48

       At this moment as he clutched his chest, with one hand, and held his weapon with the other, he had to wonder. Just how much blood had he lost? He could feel the steady beating of his heart, hard, it rang in his ears as if great drums playing all around him. His chest rising and falling each time he took a breath a sharp sting of pain pushed ( Read more... )

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bantering_fetus November 27 2008, 16:48:26 UTC
Nicely written!

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twistxandxshout December 10 2008, 15:43:38 UTC
double thumbs up.
Glad to see you're still with the living internet.

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