Code Geass: A World Abandoned [LelouchxShirley]

[nobodyman9]

I've been writing this story for some time and I finally uploaded it to Fanfiction.net. I plan for this story to run for quite a while, so I hope you all enjoy it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5332401/1/Code_Geass_A_World_Abandoned

Comments

[ultima_vara]

Aww, I loved it. The first chapter was so sad at first - the way she was just so helpless, but it was so touching to see how Lelouch cared for her. The second chapter was lovely in the way you showed them interacting so happily (I loved the anecdote about the race!) The last chapter was really intriguing, and the retelling of the history was very nicely done. "Blackest Night" sounds quite epic.

Another thing I liked was the way you echoed Lelouch's blunt speaking style in your writing, like the way you wrote "at least she didn’t choke on it this time" -- hinting at some other, probably traumatic occurrence, but without giving any explanation of what happened. It left me with a (good) chill having to imagine it myself.

So yeah, I love your style and your plot idea, and I'm looking forward to reading the next installments!

[nobodyman9]

Thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad you liked it 8D

Oh, and just so we're clear, Lelouch didn't actually say the "at least she didn't choke on it" line. It was narration, but I guess you could also say it did reflect his thoughts to an extent.

Anyway, thanks again for the review, and I'll update ASAP!

[ultima_vara]

Oh, yes, that's what I meant, about the narration reflecting his thoughts somewhat.

And you're very welcome to the review. Great job, again.

[nobodyman9]

Hee hee, thanks. Always good to hear from my fans. :D