(fic) The Worst Intentions (Chapter Eleven)

[lemon31]

Title: The Worst Intentions
Rating: PG - 13 (this chapter)
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Wordcount: 2845
Summary: What if Draco's task was not to repair the Vanishing Cabinet, but instead, to learn Dumbledore's secrets through Harry? Bitter enemies from their first meeting, Draco must find a way to forge a bond with Harry.
Author's Notes: This is an alternative

Comments

[awakejupiter]

Oh wow. I'm really curious to see what will happen between them after this. Especially after that lovely kiss...

[lemon31]

Glad you liked the kiss, I thought the deserved it <3

[ash_1212]

I usually don't read WIP - LOL cos I'm always so impatient for the next chapter - but stories always suck me in. Like yours. Which is great and so interesting.

Poor Draco - the enormity of his task and then his changing feelings for Harry must really be doing a number on him. No wonder his grades are slipping.

And poor Harry (see Harry that's why we don't cast unknown spells) - I'm assuming he went to see if Draco was okay and reacted on instinct when he heard the Crucio. I hope Draco will give him a chance to explain and isn't too upset - cos the boys are so cute together and I'm loving the pace of their relationship.

Can't wait for more :D.

[lemon31]

I'm exactly the same, but I'm glad you got sucked into this one as I'm writing it. I'll be posting the next chapter very soon =]

*hugs poor Draco and Harry*

[twilighthdfan]

Ooh very interesting. Poor Draco and Harry. Both cast on instinct (I think anyway). Hopefully this doesn't hurt their budding relationship too much. Can't wait to read more :).

[lemon31]

Yes, in my version of the canon the spells were cast on instinct. The effect of it on their relationship will be revealed shortly <3

[silverraven]

oh, poor Draco! This made my heart pang. I hope the boys can find some happiness soon.

Another wonderful part!

[lemon31]

It makes my heart pang to write them like this! I can't keep them miserable forever....

Thanks