Fic: Borrowed Time (7/11)

Jan 30, 2010 19:09

Title: Borrowed Time (Part 7 of 11)
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borrowed time, fanfic

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sykira January 30 2010, 22:43:37 UTC
"astonished vociferations"

BRILLIANT! You have such a way with words m'dear

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lemon_pencil January 31 2010, 01:50:12 UTC
Ah, I have been told my love of long words makes me sound pretentious so I'm glad you don't think so! :P Thanks!

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sykira January 31 2010, 12:22:27 UTC
no no no, and trust me, i call people pretentious all the time, i have no tolerance for it at all, you are not remotely pretentious, just talented.

I think the difference is if you are just using big words or if you are using the RIGHT big words, and astonished vociferations = one noun, one descriptive and yet conveys SO MUCH that is EXACTLY him

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lemon_pencil January 31 2010, 13:40:41 UTC
Aw, thank you. I get slightly miffed when people say 'Why use that word when you could use a shorter word?' Why NOT make use of all the lovely words out there? :) I like words lol.

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lemon_pencil January 31 2010, 01:52:19 UTC
Thanks! Yes, I'm aware I have no life hehe ;)

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lemon_pencil January 31 2010, 02:01:22 UTC
As proven by the fact that we're both still awake at two o'clock in the morning commenting... :P

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sczep84 January 31 2010, 00:11:37 UTC
I was so scared for Donna. YAY Doctor for saving her, well done!
I loved that he kept his mouth on hers longer than necessary *gg*

Can't wait for the next part!! (only 4 to go? *iz sad*)

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lemon_pencil January 31 2010, 01:56:00 UTC
Hee, no need to be scared, I wouldn't kill her half-way through a fic! :)

Thanks! Lol I'm chuffed that you're sad it'll end soon - was worried people would think it was dragging on! But then I have read the whole thing quite a few times in writing it so I'm pretty bored of it! Although... I might have a tiny epilogue lined up too... shhh :P

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lifefailsme January 31 2010, 08:40:29 UTC
Wow that is uber. Scary for Donna tho! Cant wait for more of this, it's win!

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lemon_pencil January 31 2010, 13:35:03 UTC
Thanks :) Got to keep them on their toes, y'know!

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ghraphite January 31 2010, 11:29:34 UTC
Finally caught up with the fic. Yay! A proper Doctor and Donna adventure! You've got the voices down pat and your descriptions are great. I love it.

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lemon_pencil January 31 2010, 13:36:34 UTC
Aw, thanks for taking the time to catch up :) Glad you like it!

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