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Fic: Borrowed Time (8/11)

Jan 31, 2010 19:07

Title: Borrowed Time (Part 8 of 11)
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borrowed time, fanfic

Comments 27

lifefailsme January 31 2010, 19:51:32 UTC

Twisty turny you, done good. I am on the edge of my seat with where you is going with this...

lemon_pencil January 31 2010, 20:48:36 UTC

Oh dear, I hope I don't disappoint!

Thanks :)

lifefailsme February 1 2010, 05:40:44 UTC

You never have before so I doubt it...

time_converges January 31 2010, 19:59:19 UTC

Hector is evil?!?!
Totally didn't see that coming!
Can't wait for what's next!

lemon_pencil January 31 2010, 20:49:44 UTC

Hehe, I totally saw it coming! Weird, that :P

Thanks!

katherine_b January 31 2010, 20:31:42 UTC

Ah, yes, his sudden but inevitable betrayal. Too many places he shouldn't have been so it was all too handy. I'm surprised that the Doctor was shocked though. He usually has people pegged before that. I look forward to seeing exactly what Hector is up to and how the Doctor and/or Donna can get them out of it.

lemon_pencil January 31 2010, 21:34:51 UTC

I thought you'd probably see it coming! Hmm yeah he does often suss people out but not always - he didn't know that Lance was working for the other side in TRB, did he? (Well, he never said so if he did...) And they hadn't spent very long with him. So you can forgive him this once (and me for writing it like that lol)

Thanks, more about Hector tomorrow :)

katherine_b February 1 2010, 04:11:24 UTC

I have to admit I'm always suspicious of original characters and I had to wonder about him from the beginning, but I don't like to spoil it for other people who read the comments as well as the fics. As for Lance, I think he had a pretty good idea as soon as he saw him with the axe, and perhaps as soon as Lance vanished to sneak around behind the Racnoss. Either that or I'm just making use of 20-20 hindsight.

But there's nothing to forgive! This is your fic and you can write it any way you like!

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lemon_pencil January 31 2010, 21:36:13 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad it had the element of surprise for you :)

sczep84 January 31 2010, 22:07:24 UTC

*gasps* Hector how could u! What a twist! Loved it.

My fave bit was “Oh, if anyone can it’s geek boy here,” Donna smirked. “He loves odd equipment. If he starts talking to it and telling it how gorgeous it is, just smile and nod.” Awww, made me giggle!

Can't wait for part 9 *bounces*

lemon_pencil February 1 2010, 01:30:33 UTC

I know, and I was really quite fond of him too :P

Hee, I'm glad I made you giggle.

Thanks!