Fic: Borrowed Time (9/11)

Feb 01, 2010 19:08

Title: Borrowed Time (Part 9 of 11)
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borrowed time, fanfic

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lifefailsme February 2 2010, 07:59:32 UTC
LOL Donna has to point out the obvious doesn't she?

This is fantastic, I am greatly anticipating the next two chappies.

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lemon_pencil February 2 2010, 20:04:41 UTC
Yeh well, with spaceman getting a little over-excited, someone's got to :)

Thanks! Ah... I also have a mini epilogue. Yep, this really does go on forever! People will start offering me large sums of money to STOP WITH THE NEVER-ENDING FIC soon enough :P

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ghraphite February 4 2010, 20:02:55 UTC
I thought old Hector was okay.
*slaps the Doctor a bit for being an idiot* That guy was furtively sneaking around and he had suspiciously advanced technology! lol. I had thought the Doctor was just play-acting to go along with Hector's story and would have a back-up plan up his sleeve.

“Very well,” said Hector, beginning to pace up and down the room. “As you walked so docilely into my trap, I think I will tell you.”
Nooooooooo! The List, Hector! Read the List! This is not Show & Tell. ... uhm, yeah. Anyway.

ooh, I like the description of the voyage the refugees took.

Poor Hector though. Poor little misfit. Still doesn't excuse killing a few thousand people but at the same time : awwww *pets poor little Hector*

“Sometimes,” said Donna, shaking her head. “I wonder how you fit all of that stuff in your head. I mean, I’ve felt what it’s like and whoa! It’s so noisy inside your brain!”
It's so something she would say. *grins*

“We’re still tied up in chains, dumbo…” *hugs Donna* Don't ever change! ILU ( ... )

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lemon_pencil February 4 2010, 20:11:23 UTC
Aw, but Hector was nice! Perhaps the Doctor was a bit preoccupied with the Donna situation...

I know, I'm well aware that I've fallen into the trap of writing the typical Evil Overlord monologue that inevitable leads to the destruction of said evil overlord :) But to be honest, there's just no denying that it's the most useful (if tired and cliched) plot device available!

Hee, hope you're enjoyng it!

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