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"Machiavelli's Favorite Son" 3/?

Jul 08, 2012 20:13

Title: "Machiavelli's Favorite Son" 3/?
Author: Lena
Fandom: Marvel
Warnings: Many political discussions.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Marvel is god, I'm just a lowly worshiper, blah, blah, blah ( Read more... )

darcy, loki, marvel, fiction, machiavelli's favorite son

Comments 4

dungeonwriter July 9 2012, 02:26:39 UTC

Another amazing chapter, poor Darcy is playing Warwick to Loki's Edward and I think it's going to go badly for her.

lena7623 July 11 2012, 03:18:04 UTC

Only time will tell just how bad (if at all) things will go for her.

Glad you're enjoying!

classics_lover July 9 2012, 10:06:10 UTC

I was going to say what dungeonwriter said, but with Alexander the Great and Parmenio :-P

Great chapter. I can foresee some deep shit going down - I just hope Darcy doesn't get hurt!

I love the idea of Loki in civilian clothes, too - he would look so buff in tight black slim-leg jeans *goes to happy place with jeans!Wearing!Loki* :-)

Loving this story so much.

BTW, just thought you might like to know there's a small typo: He wanted to make sure that this was a real threat and not too people who were simply having discussions. The "too" should be "two". I'm sorry to say it, but it's the one grammatical error that bugs me.

lena7623 July 11 2012, 03:20:58 UTC

Ha! SO awesome.

Deep shit will definitely go down eventually. It's just a matter of when, me thinks.

Loki in civi clothing is just...oddly hot to me and I can't figure out why. I hope they put him in some in Avengers 2 or something. Just a pair of jeans and a shirt. I'd drool.

Glad you're enjoying it!

And it's perfectly OK to correct my grammar. I have fairly bad grammar and Word can't pick up those types of mistakes. I'll make sure to fix it soon!