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lenageek

The Right to Love - Part 17

Jan 23, 2012 16:39

Title: The Right to Love

Spoilers: Takes place after ep 101 (8x09) after Pepa and Silvia have become engaged. This is a sequel to my previous PepSi fanfic, In Love’s Defense. My fic follows LHDP up to ep 101 but departs from the show at that point - ep 104 never has and never will exist in this version of Pepa and Silvia’s world.

Rating: R for a lot ( Read more... )

fan fic, pepa/silvia

Comments 9

imayfan January 24 2012, 10:05:07 UTC

Love it!!!!!

lenageek January 24 2012, 16:27:57 UTC

Gracias! This scene came into my head months amd months ago and I just had to write it right then and there. I had to tinker with it a lot as I lead up to it, but I was happy with how it came out.

reiimy97 January 24 2012, 14:36:54 UTC

What a sweet and beautiful chapter. Pepa and Silvia "Siempre. Soulmate."

lenageek January 24 2012, 16:28:37 UTC

Aww, thanks! I'm a big ol' mushball when it comes to expressing the romance between PepSi! :D

selinakris January 25 2012, 20:24:31 UTC

Brilliant.

lenageek February 3 2012, 02:17:18 UTC

Gracias, guapa! :D

suying87 January 29 2012, 16:59:30 UTC

So awesomely done! The way you inserted scenes from the series.. The way Silvia felt Pepa's present and know they will meet again someday.. The way Pepa was so upset that she wasnt there for Silvia.. All the emotions felt so real.. I dunno how many times I have said this and I will say it again and again.. I love your way of writing LG! So emotional yet so sweet.. Thank you for yet another wonderful chapter love! x

lenageek February 3 2012, 02:21:22 UTC

I dunno how many times I have said this and I will say it again and again.. I love your way of writing LG! So emotional yet so sweet.. Thank you for yet another wonderful chapter love!

Aww, thanks! As I mentioned to my friend imayfan, I actually wrote this chapter months and months ago when it popped into my head and I had to write it down. I always wondered what it would be like if Pepa had been there for Silvia when she was shot - so I took a few liberties and delved more into Silvia's emotions to find a way for her to say that she was always thinking about Pepa. It was a challenging but great scene to work on. I'm happy with how it came out.

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lenageek May 7 2012, 10:55:03 UTC

Backwards, forwards, I don't care how you review them - the fact that you took the time to read and then reply to every part - well, I appreciate that more than words can say. Thank you!

I <3 vigilant Pepa. She's there to make sure her wife wants for nothing.

I'm sure doctors make the worst patients! And I'd love for Silvia to be jumping around already, but realistically, after being in a coma for a week, I'm forcing the character to have some down time and still be physically drained - I'm trying to inject some reality/accuracy in the story I suppose.