[Axis Powers Hetalia] The Heart-Shaped Chocolate Box [FrUK, Implied Others]

[lenarix_klinde]

Title: The Heart-Shaped Chocolate Box
Author/Artist: lenarix_klinde
Character(s) or Pairing(s): FrUK, implied others
Rating: MA
Warnings: Sex, potty mouths
Summary: France gives England a blowjob on Valentine’s Day. Thank you to thenakedcat for the beta.
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Comments

Review~

[lilith_kisaragi]

Well I must say I totally loved this. In fact, I'm so going to save this file in my computer so I can re-read it as many times as I want (specially if I need to write a smut myself).

I think it's the most "canonical" and accurate point of view of the FrUK relationship. I love how you keep all the fic raw and non-sentimental. That's exactly what I think their relationship is most of the time: sex and that's all. But, on the other hand, I just loved how, in some points, it looks like France is thinking of "something more than just that" as if he put his heart over his brains for a moment, and how it looks like all these times England does something harsh or blunt, as if he knew what the french was thinking about and didn't want him to go any further.
And I also don't know if that was intended or if it's just my headcanon I read between the lines but it's like how they call themselves with their country names and not their "human" ones makes everything better. It's like, even though they know their names (in some point of the fic

[madam_red]

This is great smut writing, I really enjoyed it !

[anonymous]

This is really depressing to read, and actually made me cry. It's just seems like England's taking every opportunity that he can to hurt France, and France just pushes it off with annoyance, which is probably because they've have been doing this for a while. It's seems like France wants a bit of affection, but England just wants to use him as a toy and nothing more. Honestly it makes me wonder why France even does this, if England's just going to be an ass about it, because France didn't enjoy that. This fic just feels so... selfish and dirty, especially on England's part. And it feels like something's developing on France' end, but England just wont let it happen, and he's just making sure that France knows that he hates him, and only wants him for sex, and that, for Arthur, France is pretty much only a mouth for him to use and discard as he pleases. This is the exact opposite of what I was hoping for, and seems more like a bit of PWP for UsUK fans to remind themselves of how much England just despises France and that their pairing