The Introductions, part 1

[lenka_san]

Hello,
this is beginning of my first attempt to write a fic. Please be gentle with me :)

Okay, I think the introductions of main characters would be good for a start, because they both are OC. Lewis Orwell is mine and William O´Darwen was created by ae_werin Thank you, darling, for him and for your suggestions while control-reading this piece

Comments

[portisheart]

so it's an own fic, not a fanfic? good idea!
if the town's called megalopole, it's a fictive country hm? like another u.s kinda place?
the guy seems a concentrate of those smexxy yaoi semes - young but already powerful, a bit wild, good physique *hmm*.. his hair, long or short? i see him with long hair somehow. but all my favs - Fei Long, Halvir, Haleceles & Orochimaru (yes!) have long hair XDD.
just the bit with the weapons, i haven't understood if he does or not deal with them, if he's the boss and his subs sell them or what else his job is..
good start! ^^

[lenka_san]

Yes, it´s like that. Megalopole is the city our characters live in :)
He´s one of those yaoi semes XD I too love long haired ones (yay for Orochimaru XD) but his hair is similar to Asami´s :)
And about weapons - he´s boss and owner of factories, signs contracts, his name is on containers of sold weapons...it´s his job and he likes it :)

Thanks for reading and comment :)

[portisheart]

ah now i get the nuance between "firearms" = yes, "bombs & rockets" = no. i first thought just weapons generally..
well, i look forward to his companion's intro & to their adventures!! ^^