The Art of Trying (Part 13)

Jan 15, 2012 21:46


Woaaahhh, look at this, a quick update! ;)

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“Wh… what did you say?!”

Brendan turned from Stephen’s sleeping figure to Cheryl, fixing his eyes on his sister seriously. “I said I want him to move in with us.”

Cheryl blinked, momentarily struggling to find the right words. “A…are you sure that’s a good idea, I mean… after everything that happened ( Read more... )

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ayla_89 January 16 2012, 11:27:19 UTC
Aww I'm so happy Stephen's moving in with him! :D Also love how you've written this and Brendan's cautious attitude over the violence, very realistic. Can't wait to read more!

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lennon_jok January 20 2012, 14:21:56 UTC
thank you! i would like to start writing the next chapter today because I'm in an incredibly shippy mood, but life getting in the way! :( hopefully will be soon though x

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fan_tastcic January 16 2012, 17:38:04 UTC
i just wanna hug this chapter and them and you! but i bet its going to be hard for B to watch Stephen do the PT with Roger! thanks for the fast update! cant wait to see what happens next!

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lennon_jok January 20 2012, 14:23:10 UTC
Myself and the chapter will gratefully take that hug! ;)
Yes, its not going to be all plain-sailing of course; it's stendan! however i am in a shippy mindset (a result of the show being a bastard and my heart wanting to spite them) so the next chapter may well be a nice one. hopefully will come soon x

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greenangelheart January 17 2012, 16:03:58 UTC
Awwww I really liked this chapter and yay to a quick update!

I think I've told you about a million times how well you write Brendan, but I'm not sure if I have mentioned Ste, so just wanted to say I felt like you really got Ste's voice in this, the dialect was great so I could really imagine Ste (as played by Kieron) in my mind.

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lennon_jok January 20 2012, 14:24:04 UTC
thanks hun, that really means a lot. I loooooove Ste so much i could diiiiieeee!! I only wish Hollyoaks would focus on his pov more. pffffttt. xx

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