It's Twelve O'clock And I Need Your Attention 3/3

[lennykk123]

Title: It's Twelve O'clock And I Need Your Attention 3/3
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[stronger_now_x]

You already know that I love this, probably because I beta it and tell you as we're talking on AIM. But still, I love this to death and think it's amazing. And unfunfunf @ sex scene. <3 William screams his approval. Literally. ;)

[stronger_now_x]

COOKIESSS :D

[lennykk123]

yes bb you get cookies now. what kind would you like??

[stronger_now_x]

YAY :D that makes me happy. But umumumummmm.
William&Gabe flavored? :D

[lennykk123]

haha i didn't get it at first but now i do!! *feels smart*

[ribbonsonwrists]

one thing that bothered me, in this really nice fic, was that "usted" is used as a formal form of you.

tu is a familiar.

"Sabes que, estoy enamorado con ti, cielito."

[you see, i'm in love with you, my little heaven]

Gabe may speak proper Spain spanish, but he's still a chill dude, and the use of the formal ALWAYS kills me.

but it was a good fic, dirty, sweet and just hot enough to make me blush.

[lennykk123]

okay... um i used a translator because i don't speak spanish so...

[ribbonsonwrists]

i kind of figured as much, and that's why i'm trying not to be too much of a hard-on about it. just if you write spanish speaker gabe, see if your beta can soften the edges a bit.

[lennykk123]

she's never mentioned the language thing... hm....

[prettyodd_me]

Omg bb, a dedication! Thank you <333

swallowing every bit of cum that came out
Ok, odd bit to quote, but I love it coz not many people actually write cum, and I'm laughing at myself for even thinking about that, but yeah :P
I love it, all of it, awesome bb, unf

[lennykk123]

thank you. i kind of like it too.