Admitting Defeat

[leonix8238]

Pale fingers twitch nervously, slick with anticipation. Dark eyes smouldering, expertly disguising the fear within. Quick as a flash his opponents hand darts towards their intended target, rendering him powerless. What was he to do now? There was no where to go, he would have to accept defeat. The sickening realisation coursed through his veins

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[hestia_lacey]

Aww... lovely. Makes me all gooey. Or as gooey as I can imagine ever being where Severus Snape is concerned. The characterisation was spot on here too. Thsi part in particular:

There was no where to go, he would have to accept defeat. The sickening realisation coursed through his veins ever faster as she began laughing at him.

Yes, Sev, she BEAT YOU. I adored his reaction here; you just know he'd be like this over a game of chess :D