Guardian Angel

[leonix8238]

Leaning down she drops her head upon his heavy chest. Tears stain the black robes, pleading with him not to die. Heart broken she cares not if she is found, lying next to him on the cold, wooden floor, clothes stained in blood.  She will not leave him.

Time passes slowly, agonisingly until she hears “Hermione” her bloodshot eyes shoot open

Comments

[rhubu_soho]

Hmm. I never fancied this pairing but even I have to admit that this is verrrrry well written :)

Is there to be more?

[leonix8238]

I know what you mean about the ship. When i first stumbled blindly into the online fandom, i was horrified at the suggestion! Then since it's me and i'm a glutton for punishement, clicked the link straight away and well...the rest is history! lol

There may be more but i'm not sure yet. I do have a few other story ideas simmering away in Snapes potion lab tho, just waiting for the darn things to be ready. Potions man 'tis a patient business.

Anyway, thank you very much for the comments i was a little worried that the second half would go down like a lead balloon, but so far it's managed to float along quite nicely lol!!

P.s...This is probably the longest comment ever...i am sorry!

[hestia_lacey]

“Miss Granger, whilst I admire your audacity now is most certainly not the time, now get to your feet and follow me!”

Hehe, hit characterisation square on the head with Snape here, I think. And I recall you angsting over this at the time, but don't worry; both parts work very well indeed.

And how weird is this, man? Communication via LJ. Oh the possibilities...

[leonix8238]

I think it's in desperate need of some reworking and grammer correction but I still think It's the best fic I've ever written. :D