FIC: Tenere (PG, Dualla; L/D and implied L/K)

[lepetitarsenic]

BSG fics completed: 2
BSG fics in-progress: 15-ish
Plot bunnies in my head: 500,000
Plot bunnies yet to be discovered: Infinity times oh, let's say... ten.
Betas currently at my disposal: 0

Bunny, beta, or feedback. Ready, steady, go!

Title: Tenere
Author: lepetitarsenic
Rating: PG
Character: Dualla-centric
Pairings: Lee/Dualla and Lee/Kara, mostly implied.

Comments

[lozenger8]

I love it. You've said so much in a short space of time.

[lepetitarsenic]

Thank you! The ultimate aim of any short fic. ^_^

[doomcrayon]

Oooooooh. Excellent.

Sorry. Meaningful commentary: I loved the roundabout-but-compelling way you drew in the reader. I actually read it before I realized that there was an angst warning, so the impact at the end was awesome. Thank you. :)

[lepetitarsenic]

Doooooooom,

Thank you! That means a lot, since you know I fangirl your style intensely. I tend to skip past authors notes' until the end as well- but the angst warning? You must heed the angst warning! God forbid a non fluffy ending should sneak up on you and offend your tender shippy sensi- oh, wait, forgot who I was talking to. XD

[doomcrayon]

Oh, indeed. I am delicate like that. *le sigh*

[maroon_notebook]

I dig this intensely. Great work.

[lepetitarsenic]

Thank you! Aww, I love the colors in that icon. BSG needs more happy and less drab color filters.

[lepetitarsenic]

Neat! You picked up on one of the mini-dimensions of this that I wanted to go into further but couldn't quite get a handle on, and articulated it really well. Thank you!

[lpmufinfiend]

Oh my word, you've just made it humanly possible to love Dee again. Actually, you've made it possible to hold tight to my beloved L/K while still loving Dee. Thank you.

Except that now I have a complex, see. Now I will be a bit delete-happy when I edit my fics. You have set a new standard (this is a good thing).

Encore! *sniffles*

[lepetitarsenic]

Hee! I've been found out. I had to reconcile my Dee-love and my L/K obsession somehow. I think all the writers need to do to fix it is to show us Dualla's depth; we know she's clever and caring and highly capable, we just never really get hit with the whole picture.

Wow, that's a super-high compliment. My style's kinda sparse by default, which works in some fandoms and not so much in others, so I'm very glad you liked it!

[lpmufinfiend]

we just never really get hit with the whole picture.

So true. She's ice queen, commander's pet, snark gun, and surprisingly warm and loving in turns, but nobody's snapped it together into a whole person yet. You've managed-- now the people responsible for the show need to get it down.