A PILLOWCASE CORRESPONDENCE: UNLUCKY 13

[lesinnocents]

Title: A Pillowcase Correspondence
Authors: megyal and lesinnocents
Pairing: Patrick/Peter
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Dear Patrick...
Disclaimer: 100% Disclaimed.
Author's Note: SORRY IT'S BEEN FOREVER. I KNOW, I SUCK.

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Comments

[irishsaints]

fuck.

like...pardon my language, but really.

i just don't know what to say to this, at all. its THAT good.

your voice in my head, singing my words and strumming your fingers over the melodies that match my heartbeats - but I’m just grabbing at your ankles and you’re dancing in circles.

that and this one...

I’ve injected you and you’re within me now, all around and locked inside, threading through my arteries and perfuming the air I breathe.

effing POETIC. seriously. brilliantly amazing.

i can't get over how well you guys have captured pete and patrick- like, its not some over-cliched thing, its like the REAL, honest-to-God Pete and Patrick. the way they are, and what they are and who they are, underneath everything that we see, percieve them as. this is them under everything we know.

and this is wonderful. that's all i can say. i could care less that it was late. the amazingness of this made up for it.

i'm really excited for the next chapter. like, legit. ultra excited.

[lesinnocents]

Wow, you just made my eyes go all O_O

And I am quite possibly blushing.

Thank you so, so much. You are far too flattering. It's really amazing to hear you say that we've captured them like that, because I think that's basically what this project set out to do - show Pete and Patrick both in their lives and in their minds.

Really, you blow me away. Thank you! Keep reading!

[irishsaints]

hehe well i'm glad i could make you smile.

but really, it's true. it's quite amazing.

and I shall keep reading! I look forward to it!

[lesinnocents]

I shall look forward to reading your comments! I hope you continue to enjoy it ^__^

[megyal]

I'm just about dumbstruck. I've read this like three times already and it's just.. I cannot get over how much I feel it. I had a strange tiny panic-attack at one point, and just their desperation and emotion, holy shit.

I love it, Britt. This chapter is so raw, it's amazing.

[lesinnocents]

*squeak* Your criticism is always the one I fear the most, but you always make me squee! I was so lost after your last chapter, I didn't know if I was gonna be able to pull off something like this... I like how it turned out, though, even though I wish I had the balls to do some riskier scenes.

But for revenge I threw you a bit of a loop too! Ha! I'm so excited to read yours now ^__^

[erraticxthought]

Oh, it's sort of sad. Patrick is all "I love you" and Pete is all "I love you so I'm going to go kill myself." Lovely plan. You illustrate -- describe -- I cannot find an adequate verb -- his emotional state wonderfully. Pete is like the Beckett who did not piss me off, and since you are writing Pete that would apply to you as well [erm -- it might be better to forget that I tried to be polite and offer a comment].

[lesinnocents]

Pete is like the Beckett who did not piss you off? Lauren, you are a strange, strange little girl. But this is why I like you!

I... guess... that means you... liked... it...? I dunno. Er... thanks? Heh.

P.S. I bought my Brand New tickets! I am much excited! Oooh, the day is drawing nearer... we'll have to talk sometime about how all of this is going to be arranged.

[erraticxthought]

Oh...yes...I did like it. I forgot to mention that. Sorry. It was quite lovely for being FOBslash and in general your writing style is quite -- gripping, descriptive, and edgy. Not sure if edgy is the word I want, but meh.

Also, Samuel Beckett. The man who rambles on and on for ages to get to a point. He probably only annoys me because I am taking a class on him.

And...it is good you bought your Brand New tickets or I would be obligated to kill you for not doing it and then feeling guilty because I did not do it for you and then I think they might sell out because goddamnit. Brand New is better than Fall Out Boy.

[lesinnocents]

OKAY OKAY OKAY - I'll give you that. Brand New is better than Fall Out Boy. But only by a teensy, teensy little bit. FOB is definitely dancier, though. And I sure as hell don't listen to Brand New when I want to be put in a soaring good mood.

Ah. Good ol' Samuel Beckett. Far less sexy than his William Eugene counterpart.