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FIC: "Up In Flames" by kcstories

Oct 31, 2008 17:21

Title: Up In Flames
Author: kcstories
Rating: PG
Words: ~1,000
Warnings: Character death (not Lily or Severus). Not exactly canon.
Disclaimer This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and Raincoast Books, and Warner Bros. Inc. Written ( Read more... )

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Comments 10

lavinialavender October 31 2008, 19:10:17 UTC

Nice AU! Simple and to the point. I like how Severus stays IC, you don't dramatize too much his love for Lily.

I wonder how it would have been if Severus raised Harry with Lily...are they trying to keep secret that he was the Boy Who Lived, or even their identities from the wizarding world?

kcstories November 22 2008, 01:06:20 UTC

Thank you. I'm very glad you liked it! :)

And yes, I imagine they would have gone into hiding indefinitely, unless circumstances somehow forced them to resurface.

Good artikaluvssnape November 1 2008, 00:01:53 UTC

Very nice---simple. Seems like an excellent beginning to a longer story.

Re: Good kcstories November 22 2008, 01:06:38 UTC

Thanks! :)

orpheus_samhain November 1 2008, 21:58:08 UTC

This is very satisfying. If Severus was able to beg both Voldemort and Albus, promising 'anything', I'm sure making contact with Lily and arranging everything himself, so that he was sure, or almost sure (vide James), that everything went well, isn't far fetched at all.

Loving it!

kcstories November 22 2008, 01:07:18 UTC

Thank you very much! :) I'm glad this premise worked for you.

writermerrin November 1 2008, 23:18:46 UTC

A chilling but hopeful Halloween story. Sev is brilliant!

kcstories November 22 2008, 01:07:33 UTC

Thanks! :)

shyfoxling November 5 2008, 01:20:19 UTC

Hmmm, now I really wonder what's in the miracle potion...~

kcstories November 22 2008, 01:07:51 UTC

:)

Thank you!