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FIC: "Unfogging the Future" (G)

Oct 31, 2009 22:15

Title: Unfogging the Future
Author: harktislark
Rating: G
Words: ~3,000
Warnings: None.
Summary: Divining the future is an imprecise art, but Lily and Severus make the most of their tea leaves.
Author's Notes: Much adoration for R., my lovely beta. Also, this site and this site were used as references.

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Comments 4

orpheus_samhain October 31 2009, 22:27:04 UTC

Thank you for such a beautiful story! I love Severus' voice in this, his poses, the pretending that he didn't care, and yet he was so acutely aware of Lily's mood shifts :) And it was so like him to refuse Lily's help to stand up :)

The last scene was really poignant without being over-dramatised. Excellent work.

harktislark November 10 2009, 06:36:22 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you like it. ;&hearts And yeah, poor Severus, so aware and yet so not. :( Such a prickly fellow.

randomneses November 10 2009, 00:44:39 UTC

This was a nice little read. I especially loved the 1975 bit. Very visual! I'm upset that I missed this when it was posted.

harktislark November 10 2009, 06:41:56 UTC

Thank you for reading! :) (I love your icon, by the way.)