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FIC for lovesnape: "Severus Snape Sends His Regrets"

Jun 20, 2008 21:59

Title: Severus Snape Sends His Regrets
Author: tjwritter
Recipient: lovesnape
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~7,000
Warnings: wank, angst, Snape as a Death Eater, cruelty to a Marauder, explicit sex
Summary: What do you give the happy couple who has everything? What if Harry wasn’t the only Potter who received a few of Snape’s choice memories?
Author's Notes: This is for lovesnape. ( Read more... )

fic, round_2008

Comments 49

shyfoxling June 20 2008, 22:38:53 UTC

Oh, and an additional comment to the one on IJ:

“Sev,” she whispered, breathily, “feel…so…good.”
“How good?” he asked, locking eyes and pulling out then back in, slowly.
“The…best…”
“The very best?” he asked, repeating the motion, torturously slow.
She nodded and looked away, pumping her hips to drive him deeper.
“Say it.”
“No one…better…”

Nnnyyargh. Yum. Pushes my "sexually confident/powerful Severus" button quite firmly.

tjs_whatnot June 26 2008, 03:01:46 UTC

Thank you! I think this is the first time I've ever written a Snape Sex Scene with a girl! I'm glad I pushed some buttons!

torino10154 June 21 2008, 02:42:11 UTC

Holy cow! Severus is wicked. *g* I just adore that he's given those memories to James. This is rough and somewhat dark which is so refreshing. Great piece.

tjs_whatnot June 26 2008, 03:03:21 UTC

Thank you! I only wish the bunnies would have shown me what happened the night James got that particular "gift"!

I didn't mean it to be as dark as it was, but I'm glad you enjoyed it!

lariopefic June 23 2008, 02:07:11 UTC

Wow.

Very well imagined, very emotionally true. Dark and beautiful.

tjs_whatnot June 26 2008, 03:04:12 UTC

Thank you! It means a lot to me that you read and enjoyed it!

death_ofme June 23 2008, 03:41:57 UTC

Holy crap, this was so good.

I wish I could say something more intelligent, but I don't have it in me right now. That ending...*shudders*...

tjs_whatnot June 26 2008, 03:05:24 UTC

Thank you!

Yeah, Severus was a bit of a bastard huh? LOVE IT!!

death_ofme June 26 2008, 03:13:57 UTC

I mean, what Severus did in this fic is what everyone wanted him to do in DH *shakes fist at JKR*.

I really didn't expect it either, I think you distracted me with the (hot!) smut and all. Then...POW!

I hope you take my blitherings as a compliment. I'm utterly reduced to comic book onomatopeias.

tjs_whatnot June 26 2008, 03:37:17 UTC

Totally take it as a compliment! I've never reduces someone to comic book onomatopeias before! :)

I like to imagine that Severus did a bit of this in canon--just because he didn't share these memories with Harry doesn't mean the didn't happen! *snirk*

Thread 5

calumfan June 23 2008, 04:38:24 UTC

This is amazing, I just finished reading it for the second time and it was still just wonderful.

tjs_whatnot June 26 2008, 03:07:16 UTC

Thank you so much! And thank you for reccing it at "The New Library" it made me giddy and twitchy to hear all those nice things about it and not be able to be able to say anything in way of thanks!

I am so glad you enjoyed it!