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FIC for tjwritter: "The Fates"

Jun 21, 2008 21:39

Title: The Fates
Author: missyvortexdv
Recipient: tjwritter
Rating: PG-13
Words: ~4,000
Warnings: none
Summary: Severus had hope once, and what life did not take away from him, he gave away bit by bit in a fruitless search for something better than this.
Author's Notes: Written for tjwritter.

( The Fates )

fic, round_2008

Comments 21

juniperus June 23 2008, 13:44:18 UTC

No words. Just....wow.

missyvortexdv July 1 2008, 18:34:57 UTC

Thanks. :D

muggle_prof June 23 2008, 14:55:16 UTC

Such a moving piece. I had tears in my eys at the mental ward scene -- the best reality he's located so far.

missyvortexdv July 1 2008, 18:35:36 UTC

Wow, that's amazing to hear. Hope you enjoyed it even if it did make you cry. :)

torino10154 June 24 2008, 10:32:22 UTC

What an interesting fic. I love the idea of Severus searching for the happy reality and never really finding one. The fact that the last one is the best is truly sad. Great job!

missyvortexdv July 1 2008, 18:35:47 UTC

Thanks. :)

venturous1 June 25 2008, 13:55:51 UTC

How heart-rending and beautiful. The penultimate scene just reduced me to tears.

This fic crystalizes soemthing for me, how much I feel for him, sifting through the impossible choices of his life for the one emerald jewel. *sniff*

missyvortexdv July 1 2008, 18:36:04 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it. :)

orpheus_samhain June 25 2008, 18:20:24 UTC

I immensely enjoyed those 'what-could-have-beens ( ... )

missyvortexdv July 1 2008, 18:37:41 UTC

Aw, sorry for embarassment! I'm glad that it worked though, it's nice to know it really made people feel for him and your analysis of it is great to get as feedback. :)