FIC for all LE/SS shippers: "Mind The Gap, Please"

Jun 22, 2008 23:17

Title: Mind The Gap, Please
Author: tjwritter
Recipient: all LE/SS shippers!
Rating: R
Words: ~4,000
Warnings: Major characters are all DEAD!
Summary: Faced with seven choices of where to spend eternity, Severus rides into the sunset…
Author's Notes: This is for all the readers, writers and artists of less_for_you. It is a collection of all the prompts I was presented ( Read more... )

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shyfoxling June 23 2008, 05:50:29 UTC
“Mind the gap, please. Next stop, Severus Snape’s Physical Passions.”
Severus blushed, and when the train stopped in no time at all, Albus said, “I think I’ll wait out here, thanks.”

That made me laugh so much.

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tjs_whatnot June 26 2008, 03:44:12 UTC
I giggled a bit too!

Thanks for reading!

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juniperus June 23 2008, 13:56:05 UTC
Clever, and so telling. Brilliant!

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tjs_whatnot June 26 2008, 03:45:02 UTC
Thank you!

Now I gotta work on your drabble for you!

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tjs_whatnot June 26 2008, 03:46:16 UTC
Thank you! I sort of used this fic to deal with my own dislike for Dumbledore with regards to his relationship with Severus. I'm glad you liked it!

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torino10154 June 24 2008, 11:55:49 UTC
Fantastic. I loved Dumbledore and his, or rather Snape's view of his, God complex LOL. And such a variety of choices-some good, some bad, all different. Nice job.

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tjs_whatnot June 26 2008, 03:48:11 UTC
Thank you! Yes, Severus and Dumbledore's dialogue in this gave me a chuckle too! And yay! Severus finally gets to make his own choices!

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bemoan1000 June 24 2008, 15:42:01 UTC

Thanks for this. I usually don’t like to read Snape die fics, because in my personal canon he lives. Lol And usually after death fics have Lily coming out of some layer of hell pointing a finger a Snape telling him how horrible he is. I like how you had Albus apologize, and so many great lines. Here are a few of my favorites.

“And yours is playing God and giving vague answers to important questions?”

“Oh yes, I forgot. Those are your favorites, your little minions-in-training, and they, of course, have done nothing wrong and are completely blameless.”

“Severus, I am so sorry. I have used and disappointed you, and I didn’t see what my own prejudices and favoritism were doing to my students and my… my friends.”

“I can only imagine how life would have been different without Marauders or Death Eaters.”

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tjs_whatnot June 26 2008, 03:51:15 UTC
usually after death fics have Lily coming out of some layer of hell pointing a finger a Snape telling him how horrible he is.

REALLY!?!?!? That's bullshit! I've only written one other Severus Afterlife fic--it was a drabble series--and it was pretty much everyone begging his forgiveness and acknowledging that no matter what else, they owe Harry's life to him...

And yes, I like to imagine him alive as well...but if in the Afterlife the only place he gets a happy ending...then so be it!

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