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[lessthanska74]

I've finished a new song for my solo project, called Summer Twilights. It can be downloaded here: http://files.filefront.com/01+Summer+Twilights+1st+Mxmp3/;9743572;/fileinfo.htmlRead more... )

Comments

[im_uh_waste]

okay i'll type this as i listen:

wow, it really picks up nice,
is that you harmonizing with yourself? you cheeky devil!
hmm that guitar part coming in over the piano is cool, i think it might sound better if each note wasn't picked individually and so... staccato.
i think the bass should be a bit more present, get that really growly low bowed sound.
i can't wait to hear more

[lessthanska74]

Haha, yep, that's me harmonizing.
I agree, that part is picked rather violently.
There actually isn't a bass in the song, just low piano. And yeah, it should be brought out more.

Thank you so much for the feedback.

[im_uh_waste]

add some stand up then

[ex_uncleflo]

so what about airline food?
y'know, airline food. i mean is that stuff terrible or what??

[nachos03]

Is this all you? Instruments and everything? and did you do all the levels for this?

it sounds pretty good, a little slow for me (that's personal), but it's not bad at all.

[lessthanska74]

I played guitar and did vocals, Scott did drums, 'Manda did piano, and Tyler McMillan did Violin. I wrote all the parts though. Me and Scott mixed it, mostly Scott.

[nachos03]

well it's good.

[lessthanska74]

Danke!

[theyallhaveone]

Good stuff you ambitious little pot of ideas.

I like all the little stuff and layers you do. And the song is good.

BUT YOU SHOULD TRY COMPACTING AND HAVE SOME SHORTER SONGS! Not that five minute plus songs are bad. But you should have some singles too! Don't consider two to three minutes restricting , consider it a challenge to take all the cool stuff to you do and fit it in those confines.

And keep up the good work!