Merlin under 300 word drabble

[lest_we_ship]

Treason Me

As the sun filtered into the courtyard.

Arthur clutched at his curtain.

Below him a medium sized crowd had gathered to view the proceedings.

Arthur straitened his back as his father addressed the people.

"Good citizens of Camelot, this denizen of immorality, this evil doer was caught unlawfully practicing magic. For this treason he shall

Comments

[auroraprimavera]

Hah, ok. See that wasn't fair. I thought it was Merlin!! Good job though.

Btw, for future ref, I suggest putting the story under an LJ cut - makes it easier for when someone is going through their friend's list. :D

[lest_we_ship]

cool. And thankyou...um how do you do a LJ cut? *cowers in shame*

[auroraprimavera]

You're welcome!

And it's ok, not a big deal, just for future reference. The larger portions of text and such are put under this tag: <*lj-cut text="description for the link"*> & at the end you add: <*/lj-cut*> - That's in the html editor.

Feel free to bug me if you have any questions on anything! :D

[phoenixgfawkes]

Great drabble. I particularly liked this line: Arthur turned, black hair, blue eyes and a terrible secret that Arthur couldn't acknowledge.

[lest_we_ship]

Thankyou so much.

[archaeologist_d]

That was a good job. At first I thought it was Merlin being killed. Well done.

[lest_we_ship]

thankyou.

[crabby_lioness]

Nice.

[lest_we_ship]

thanks

[fresica]

I completely believed that was Merlin at first, and that Arthur had been locked up to keep him from interfering. Nice twist~! My favourite part? This:

Arthur's jaw was clenched so tight he thought his teeth might crack, but it was better to think on his teeth than that convulsing feeling coming from his stomach.

I absolutely LOVE the raw emotion.

[lest_we_ship]

Yeah, i wanted to give that feeling. make arthur helpless against his father's autority, and also make him aware of his own powerlessness