Finished one essay..

Oct 17, 2005 20:23


SO i finished one college app. essay... But I'm not exactly sure that it's good and/or what a college essay is supposed to be... read more behind cut if you want.

let me know what you think. )

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pianoscry October 18 2005, 15:14:56 UTC
They're both really good! The top one is more worldly/community and the second one is more personal. But they are both very effective.

How many essays do you have to write? If you can only submit one, I would add your personal experience with your grandfather to the top one, so you can have both personal and community related reasons for going into the speech path program.

Good job Bobbi!!

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