Aw! I love it. I love the rambling-ness of it all. I like how he flits from one thought to the next without commiting to finishing an idea, it gives it that rushed, excited feeling that seems to come so naturally after an especially nice kiss.
I liked this line--
I’m stuck in this cloud of romantic clichés she’s left me in, dazed and disoriented and daffy with love.--
in particular. It stuck with me and seemed to drive the point home.
um wow. this is really good, well i mean i like it a lot. anyway im reading this because you are watching my very silly community straybits and i was wondering how you stumbled upon it.
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I liked this line--
I’m stuck in this cloud of romantic clichés she’s left me in, dazed and disoriented and daffy with love.--
in particular. It stuck with me and seemed to drive the point home.
Great job!
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