The Look

Apr 16, 2006 23:47

She opened her eyes. Blinked a few times. The light blinded her. She looked around, trying to remember the place that surrounded her. It took her a few moments to realize she was in her own room. It looked so different. The room was so lit up by the sun. The golden rays over the bed, the brightness coming from the window, the image of the world ( Read more... )

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2am____teaparty April 16 2006, 21:50:18 UTC
This made me heart sink. I can relate to it too much.

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let_it_flow April 16 2006, 21:52:01 UTC
=/ I'm sorry :(

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2am____teaparty April 16 2006, 22:01:19 UTC
No sad faces! I like that it affected me.

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let_it_flow April 16 2006, 22:03:37 UTC
In that case.... :) !

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cokebottlei April 17 2006, 01:16:17 UTC
Man, I feel sad and down. I somehow know how she is feeling...

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let_it_flow April 17 2006, 04:55:49 UTC
It is quite frustrating...

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lordlucan April 17 2006, 07:59:37 UTC
Good stuff! Very well written, I'm impressed! :)

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let_it_flow April 17 2006, 08:11:16 UTC
thank you lord pookyton!

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Re: Interesting... let_it_flow April 17 2006, 19:21:50 UTC
thanks!

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johnmill79 April 17 2006, 19:09:29 UTC
Yeah, pretty nice stuff, kind of depressing indeed, but in a good way if that's possible. lol

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let_it_flow April 17 2006, 19:19:54 UTC
hmmmm i'll take that as a compliment :)

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