seriously, love this, the sort of slow motion after the act. how things are building, are right at the edge, and heero is too intoxicated by the feeling of vertigo to care...
quatre coming in late to class. love that. purr.
the whole willow scene. oh, purr... so amazing, so... like heero's taking a step back, pretending that he's still one of the students, and this time, he found love with one of his peers... of course, in many ways, duo is more mature than he is, so he's not all wrong, but he's not all right, either...
and now the storm is breaking. meep. wish like hell heero'd've kept duo with him... *grumblesstupidteachermumbles*
It is totally not fair that you have another part so soon. You're making me look like a slacker. *pouts* But... I don't like that Duo didn't go back with Heero. And this storm sounds bad, and even though you're going to make me look even worse, I want the next part like... NOW. Ok? *grin*
More? Already? You da best! *tackle-hugs* I'm printing it out so I can take it with me to read in my lunchbreak at work - I couldn't possibly wait til I get home tonight! I will comment again on how much I love it then ^^
*raises an eyebrow* You cliffhangered it. You evil, evil mistress of the fic.
You have no idea how impatient I was in my lunchbreak, waiting for an opportunity where the other members of staff LEFT ME THE HELL ALONE so I could get on with reading this. And then I sat there grinning to myself as I read, and no doubt affirming their suspicions about my bats in the belfry >_<
But it was worth waiting for! Again, I can't get over how vivid a description you manage with your choice of words and phrase. The willow and the water and the earth - the feeling of base earthiness is conveyed so absolutely. You have such a wonderful writing style.
As for content - whee, fluffiness! You do realise I'm gonna be referring to Relena as the 'Pink Slag' continually now, right? Lol! And a delightful few droplets of background for Heero. Created some... entertaining mental images *smirk*
Now. I'm scared why the dust storm is so symbolic. I'm guessing I should fear the worst and batten down the hatches...
ever heard of blood rain? They don't just call it that coz its red you know. *evil grin*
and the first time I ever saw GW the first few seconds of it had Relena and me and my friend looked at it at EXACTLY the same time and went: *snort* pink slag. heh.
end of the world? hell yes, thats gotta be FA:A lmfao. But me writing more than one part of ng in a day...thats the end of the world too methinks. lol
glad u liked the descriptions and that you didn't find the dialogue too ooc (<---i'm parnoid about that these days. flamer hell does that to you. Still no one has flamed ng, so I can't be doing too bad. lol)
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seriously, love this, the sort of slow motion after the act. how things are building, are right at the edge, and heero is too intoxicated by the feeling of vertigo to care...
quatre coming in late to class. love that. purr.
the whole willow scene. oh, purr... so amazing, so... like heero's taking a step back, pretending that he's still one of the students, and this time, he found love with one of his peers... of course, in many ways, duo is more mature than he is, so he's not all wrong, but he's not all right, either...
and now the storm is breaking. meep. wish like hell heero'd've kept duo with him... *grumblesstupidteachermumbles*
trowa is such a quiet sage. purr!!!!
*loves on you*
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But... I don't like that Duo didn't go back with Heero. And this storm sounds bad, and even though you're going to make me look even worse, I want the next part like... NOW. Ok? *grin*
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You have no idea how impatient I was in my lunchbreak, waiting for an opportunity where the other members of staff LEFT ME THE HELL ALONE so I could get on with reading this. And then I sat there grinning to myself as I read, and no doubt affirming their suspicions about my bats in the belfry >_<
But it was worth waiting for! Again, I can't get over how vivid a description you manage with your choice of words and phrase. The willow and the water and the earth - the feeling of base earthiness is conveyed so absolutely. You have such a wonderful writing style.
As for content - whee, fluffiness! You do realise I'm gonna be referring to Relena as the 'Pink Slag' continually now, right? Lol! And a delightful few droplets of background for Heero. Created some... entertaining mental images *smirk*
Now. I'm scared why the dust storm is so symbolic. I'm guessing I should fear the worst and batten down the hatches...
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and the first time I ever saw GW the first few seconds of it had Relena and me and my friend looked at it at EXACTLY the same time and went: *snort* pink slag. heh.
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glad u liked the descriptions and that you didn't find the dialogue too ooc (<---i'm parnoid about that these days. flamer hell does that to you. Still no one has flamed ng, so I can't be doing too bad. lol)
thanks for letting me know u liked *g*
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