*g* good, coz I didn't edit it...haven't even read through it, since its heading on for midnight and I'm half dead after aikido. lol. Nice to know it wasn't too mistake-ridden
wow..the storm sounds amazing! but terrifying. ;_; The details are amazing. I'd love to see it for myself ^^I would probably be terrified..but it would be an amazing experience.
*g* dust storms will forever be my fav storms of all time....bascially because they produce the most awesome lightening storms in their wake. lol. its nice to know the feeling of it comes across int he fic too!
LOL....I've heard of that stroy where they cut through the mum! lol. But yah...I actually had a huge strom once that caused a flood in Condo, and my friend crashed their car....so I ran down the road, grabbed one of the older kids from school and force them to drive through the flood to get out the road...and we had a similar scenario...the car was pushed up against a tree and the flood water was too heavy to open the other door...we had to smash the windscreen...was freaky as hell. lol.
what tension! i mean... the beauty of the storm, but also the horror of it, the violence of it. and all the while, i'm thinking of duo, where is duo...
lamb to the slaughter. girl, you are crazy/cool... ^_^
the blood rain. chilling. but cool.
heero keeps falling asleep. nice way to show the passage of time. ^_~ man oh man, what's going on with duo...
and then poor quatre!!!! meeeeeeep!!! ah, man, for a sec there, i'd thought you killed him, but then, he's not out of the water yet, is he? wowzers!!!
you realise you just picked up on one of the most important lines in the fic? lol. and no, he's not out of the water yet *weg* lol ...you're fav bit? you didn't like the fluffy bits more? tsk tsk...you're as bad as me! lol
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wow..the storm sounds amazing! but terrifying. ;_; The details are amazing. I'd love to see it for myself ^^I would probably be terrified..but it would be an amazing experience.
*awed*
and the ghost...whooooo spookie.
Oh no! Poor Quatre! >.< more please!? more more!
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what tension! i mean... the beauty of the storm, but also the horror of it, the violence of it. and all the while, i'm thinking of duo, where is duo...
lamb to the slaughter. girl, you are crazy/cool... ^_^
the blood rain. chilling. but cool.
heero keeps falling asleep. nice way to show the passage of time. ^_~ man oh man, what's going on with duo...
and then poor quatre!!!! meeeeeeep!!! ah, man, for a sec there, i'd thought you killed him, but then, he's not out of the water yet, is he? wowzers!!!
veryvery cool stuff! by far, my favorite bit...
“I’m selfish too.”
*sighs* in a nutshell. squee.
you? rock mightily. purr. thankee!!!!
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heh, well, i love the fluffy bits, but stuff like that just really sticks with you...
^_~
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