starring, harry/louis

[lethimsleep]

starring
2.800 words, pg
Sequel to Generator First Floor

It can make you smile but it is never funny.

Comments

[colfields]

this is so gorgeous. painfully beautiful. the emotion and the intensity of your words. all of it.

i wanted to pick out my favorite line, but every word seems to be chosen so carefully and fits so perfectly.

this verse is so so so fantastic. one of my favorites, really. i hope you continue this. it's sad and lovely and poor louis (and poor harry, and poor boys), but throughout it there's that underlying sense of hopefulness, because at least they have each other.

really just beautiful.

[lethimsleep]

thank you SO much. for reading and taking the time to leave a comment and all ALL of your lovely words! i'm happy that you like this verse. and it's fabulous to know that someone other than me would also like this story to continue because. well i really want to keep writing about the boys and their issues and their stupid loft. :D

thank you, again!

[violentfires]

Harry is a city. Harry is the sea.

I'm half in love with you for this, you know.

[lethimsleep]

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GUH

thank you!!!

[tamzinrose]

it made sense
it's slowsad and quietsad
my favourite types of sad
it's also very pretty

[lethimsleep]

my favorite kinds of sad too. glad you could find them in there :)

thank you so much!

[lethimsleep]

thank you! ^^

[tracedust]

so so pretty! and painful

Harry’s eyes are so alive, Harry is a city. Louis wants to build him a monument. Name streets after all the shapes his mouth can take. His tiny ears. Louis is so gone on him, it’s not even funny. It never was. It can make you smile, but it is never funny.

gah. i love your louis.

[lethimsleep]

wow. thank you. it means a lot, coming from you, because i'm a silly fangirl. you were one of the first authors i read before braving this fandom, and frankly, you're amazing. :D