Barca High (9/?)

May 31, 2011 22:25

Title: Barca High (9/?)
Rating: R for scenes of a sexual nature and constant swearing
Words: 9881
Charcters in this chapter: Bojan Krkic, Lionel Messi, Cesc Fabregas, Xabi Alonso, Steven Gerrard, David Villa, David Silva, Sara Carbonero, Irina Shayk, Cristiano Ronaldo, Kaka
Summary of this chapter: The day of Sara's house party has arrived.
Disclaimers: ( Read more... )

pairing: fabregas/pique, pairing: kaka/ronaldo, barca high, pairing: alonso/gerrard, pairing: messi/bojan

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hope_and_heart May 31 2011, 22:39:59 UTC
I love the banter and I abso-freakin-lutely love Villa in this I just can’t tell you enough! Messi with his little crush is well cute but i just feel so bad for Bojan!
I really feel for cesc, I don’t like it when him and Geri aren’t friends :(
Torres’ girlfriend sounds very naughty if those Agger rumours are true! Tut tut!
kaka and Ronaldo are precious and I love their dynamic <3
OMG Gerlonso are awesome and the kiss was so cute but Stevie needs to stop being mean to poor Xabi!
I loved it and I got carried away here so yeah, this is brilliant can’t wait for more <3

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lets_get_messi June 2 2011, 12:02:59 UTC
Aww thanks for the comment :) I really appreciate it! Especially coming from an author like you, I think this comment is really special! :3
I'm glad you really like the dynamics of the characters because I think that's the hardest thing to write sometimes, especially in AU's at least in football!universe fics the friendships are kind of already there :)
Thanks again beautiful! :) <3 x

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fluff1038 May 31 2011, 22:47:38 UTC
Oh god wow ( ... )

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lets_get_messi June 2 2011, 12:04:45 UTC
Aww thank you for the wonderful comment my love! I'm glad you like the fic! haha! I would love for a threesome with Leo and Bojan and Villa haha! That would be a dramatic twist xD haha!
I'm glad you like the chracters, proves I'm doing at least something right xD Hope you continue to read the future updates and I promise they won't take as long to update this time around :)
<3 x

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albion_lass May 31 2011, 22:53:12 UTC
zomgggggg so sexcited this updateddddd! now off to read...

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albion_lass June 1 2011, 04:01:14 UTC
my heart breaks for cesc :( damn you pique! seriously...just...stop being a dick lol.

unf gaaahhh i love cris and kaka...so conflicted...but so hopelessly attracted to one another! i love the inner angst from the two of them and how they just shove it aside when they're together

omggggggggggg xabiiiiiiiiiiii D: stupid stevie grrrrrrrrrrrrr

and villa/messi/bojan idek. i love it though.

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lets_get_messi June 3 2011, 11:57:32 UTC
Aww thanks for the comment my love! I'm glad you like the dynamics of the relationships :) I think that Kaka and Cris are the hardest to write because they have soooo much drama in the making! haha!
Thanks again my beautiful! :) <3 x

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arsenal4ever May 31 2011, 23:20:50 UTC
OMG YAYYY! I was actually thinking about this yesterday wondering if you were gunna update anytime soon cus I really loved it. And you HAVE!

So this was just brilliant!
Leo's crush on Villa, and Villa just being adorabley obtuse to it all!
Bo suddenly picturing Leo, and how jealous he is of Leo's blatant crush on Villa.
Poor Cesc - STUPID GERI! Just dump Nuria asap!
Cris & Kaka (mate, I am never a fan of this pairing cus it involves Ronaldo - but I love it in this setting!)
Xabi&Stevie <3

OMG AND VILLA PAINTING THE DOG!

So yeah loved this and please please please update again soon?!

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lets_get_messi June 3 2011, 12:00:22 UTC
Aww wow! haha! I'm really glad you are enjoying this fic! And I really am sorry about the wait, I've been so busy with college work but now college is over I can write to my hearts content! xD
I'm really glad you like all the relationships!
I will update mega soon! I really will this time!
Thanks gorgeous!
<3

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footiewhore May 31 2011, 23:55:05 UTC
You shall be glad you couldn't see the happy dance I did when I saw you'd updated this, it was rather horrific...
But seriously, this chapter was just aeioutepituailfuapidfua, much like the rest of the story.
I'm loving the whole Bojan/Leo/Villa love triangle thingy developing (thought I would much rather some messilla and Bojan to run away with his headteacher ;))
Kaka and Cris are just really sweet
So this was all pretty much perfect and then BAM
That last bit of Gerlonso was just epic
I felt so bad for Xabi and I really hope Stevie stops being an idiot and they make out some more (in the english cupboard preferable, very waterloo road esque!)
Basically what I'm trying to say is that this story is amazing and please carry on writing it for ever and ever and ever...

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