Title: Barca High (9/?)
Rating: R for scenes of a sexual nature and constant swearing
Words: 9881
Charcters in this chapter: Bojan Krkic, Lionel Messi, Cesc Fabregas, Xabi Alonso, Steven Gerrard, David Villa, David Silva, Sara Carbonero, Irina Shayk, Cristiano Ronaldo, Kaka
Summary of this chapter: The day of Sara's house party has arrived.
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I really feel for cesc, I don’t like it when him and Geri aren’t friends :(
Torres’ girlfriend sounds very naughty if those Agger rumours are true! Tut tut!
kaka and Ronaldo are precious and I love their dynamic <3
OMG Gerlonso are awesome and the kiss was so cute but Stevie needs to stop being mean to poor Xabi!
I loved it and I got carried away here so yeah, this is brilliant can’t wait for more <3
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I'm glad you really like the dynamics of the characters because I think that's the hardest thing to write sometimes, especially in AU's at least in football!universe fics the friendships are kind of already there :)
Thanks again beautiful! :) <3 x
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I'm glad you like the chracters, proves I'm doing at least something right xD Hope you continue to read the future updates and I promise they won't take as long to update this time around :)
<3 x
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unf gaaahhh i love cris and kaka...so conflicted...but so hopelessly attracted to one another! i love the inner angst from the two of them and how they just shove it aside when they're together
omggggggggggg xabiiiiiiiiiiii D: stupid stevie grrrrrrrrrrrrr
and villa/messi/bojan idek. i love it though.
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Thanks again my beautiful! :) <3 x
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So this was just brilliant!
Leo's crush on Villa, and Villa just being adorabley obtuse to it all!
Bo suddenly picturing Leo, and how jealous he is of Leo's blatant crush on Villa.
Poor Cesc - STUPID GERI! Just dump Nuria asap!
Cris & Kaka (mate, I am never a fan of this pairing cus it involves Ronaldo - but I love it in this setting!)
Xabi&Stevie <3
OMG AND VILLA PAINTING THE DOG!
So yeah loved this and please please please update again soon?!
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I'm really glad you like all the relationships!
I will update mega soon! I really will this time!
Thanks gorgeous!
<3
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But seriously, this chapter was just aeioutepituailfuapidfua, much like the rest of the story.
I'm loving the whole Bojan/Leo/Villa love triangle thingy developing (thought I would much rather some messilla and Bojan to run away with his headteacher ;))
Kaka and Cris are just really sweet
So this was all pretty much perfect and then BAM
That last bit of Gerlonso was just epic
I felt so bad for Xabi and I really hope Stevie stops being an idiot and they make out some more (in the english cupboard preferable, very waterloo road esque!)
Basically what I'm trying to say is that this story is amazing and please carry on writing it for ever and ever and ever...
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