David Villa's Skinny Jeans (2/3)

Jun 07, 2012 21:57

Title: David Villa's skinny jeans.
Pairing: Lionel Messi/ David Villa.
Rating: NC-17/R - For Language, drug abuse throughout and sexual scenes.
Warnings: Language, drug abuse throughout, homophobia and sexual scences.
Summary: !High school AU! Lionel Messi and David Villa are students who are set an art project together.
Words: 20,000~
Disclaimer: All of ( Read more... )

pairing: messi/villa, high school au

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pickatrick June 8 2012, 19:21:44 UTC
Messilla is the only football pairing I ship, so you can guess how happy it made me!! I can't wait to read the 3rd part. And YES ! I'd love you if you extended this High School AU to more than three parts bcos everything about it excites me to no end. Anyways, I love you already!!!

I was just wondering, are you going to continue with Barca High? Its one of my favourites. And I really want to know what happens after Villa goes for a sleepover at Leo's place after the party.:)Leo's little crush on David was also so adorable. In short, what I mean to say is, please write more Messilla even after posting the third part to this, Please and thank you.

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lets_get_messi June 8 2012, 20:14:11 UTC
I adore Messilla! They are such an under-written pairing D: haha! Thank you so much my dear! This comment was beautiful! I am glad you liked what I have written and I may extend the fic further :) Awwwwwww Thanks! I really love writing Barca High! I have so much written to it, but I just need to fill in parts here and there that link things together, but I shall get it done soon for you I promise! :D <3

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pickatrick June 8 2012, 20:49:47 UTC
Yayyyyy! I am so happy. You are the best person ever. Now I am just praying to God that Leo and David end up together In Barca High. They are the most adorable pairing ever. And I need them NOW, more than ever because absence of on-field Messila can only be made up for by YOUR writing.

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lets_get_messi June 8 2012, 20:51:48 UTC
Aww you are actually the best person ever because your reviews are making me all hfuisrdfhsj! :D But yeah, there is a few twists and turns to come in Barca High, but as you can see I'm a huge sucker for Messilla XD <3 x

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believing_you June 8 2012, 20:13:02 UTC
Its so wonderful. I am dying out of love for you. I love how imperfect Leo and David are, because somehow HERE it makes them more likable. When I read the Messilla portions I almost forget they got so far because of an art assignment that neither of them have an intention of even starting. And the "artistic experiment in the boy's toilet".<3<3<3 This couldn't get better.

Thank you so much, hon for sharing this, and i hope there is more Messilla to come in the future.;)

Yeah, I want to read Barca High too. Will you be writing it?

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lets_get_messi June 8 2012, 20:17:05 UTC
Awww thank you gorgeous! Your review is wonderful! :D Yeah I may post my final part tonight and depending on the comments from that it may be extended. But yes, David and Leo are both so hopeless in this and I hope I conveyed it well enough ^__^ Thanks for your feedback dear, it's much appreciated!
Also, I shall update Barca High as soon as I can! I have so much written to it already that I just need to finish D: haha <3

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sunshineshigh June 8 2012, 20:24:11 UTC
"Leo sighed as he flicked his cigarette watching as it fizzled out in a puddle in the guttering, he hadn't got long left at all to complete his project, and he had no idea how he was going to do that now when his mind was clouded with so much colour and unknown. Questions of confusion, of what he may have done wrong, of how amazing his dick in Villa's mouth felt, overwhelmed him entirely."

I really love the contrast you create between black & white and bright colors, much like the difference in their personalities. I can never say this enough but I simply adore your writing style and I have missed it more than anything else. But now you are back, and I am all excited again.

The prospect of you writing a sequel to this after finishing three parts sounds so satisfying, and I am all like :D:D:D

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lets_get_messi June 8 2012, 20:47:21 UTC
I'm so glad you picked up on the contrasts with the colours! xD Really glad that you like it! Your review is fantastic and has me smiling like crazy! xD I hope you like the next part my dear! Thanks again! <3 x

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this_is_so_fun June 8 2012, 20:31:37 UTC
I just saw on your tumblr account that you have written a Messilla HS AU and I had to read it now. Its brilliant and just perfect. I have read and loved your writings in the past, but this one is by far my favorite, so I don't want to part with it just yet. More Messilla = More happiness. and I would love more parts to this.=)

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lets_get_messi June 8 2012, 20:48:21 UTC
YAY! Fellow tumblr-dweller! xD Glad you liked it sweetie! Thanks so much for the review! Yes, I really am leaning to writing more parts, as it seems that it could go on further! Hope you stay in tune anyhow :3 <3 x

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choco_cups June 8 2012, 20:42:49 UTC
This is the nicest thing I have ever read. I don't usually make a habit of reading Messilla, but you have really got me addicted here. The portrayal of their characters is the best part of this fic, obviously other than the body painting and bathroom blowjob.;) Like other fan girls I too would want you to continue even after the next part. I mean who wouldn't want to read more?!:)

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lets_get_messi June 8 2012, 20:49:40 UTC
Hey! Thanks for the review! Wow! Glad you came over to the Messilla darkside :P haha! Yeah, I had a lot of fun creating the characters in this, there is so much that can be done with them :) Thanks gorgeous! I am defo feeling adding more now you guys have said! :D <3 x

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