Moi~✿

Apr 28, 2020 22:10

This is a crit post. It is a very nice crit post and you should crit the hell out of me.

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trudimo September 17 2011, 16:49:40 UTC
Hi! First of all, I think you're doing great! He's totally adorable and seems very IC.

However, there's one hint I'd like to give (if you don't mind): "moi (moi)" means either "hello" or "bye bye", and randomly inserting it here and there looks a bit weird for Finnish eye. :D But that's all!

(P.S. If you need any help with the character, I'm glad to help!)

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letyoufinnish September 17 2011, 20:56:49 UTC
Oh thank you so much!

And omg I didn't know that! I thought it was a nervous tick since he repeats it quite often. Darn you Himalaya for making me think that! (9ಥ益ಥ)9

I'm still getting familiar with his history so any kind of help would be wonderful! ♥

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trudimo September 18 2011, 10:04:12 UTC
Eek wait is it *in a Finnish eye?? Geh what even is English :I

You're welcome. ♥

The more you know, haha!
/throws Himalaya into the sun??

If there's anything, feel free to ask! I'm not a history major or anything, but I'm really interested in it and I'd say I know ours relatively well. :)

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letyoufinnish September 18 2011, 21:22:13 UTC
pfftt didn't even notice

Well, if you have any source of info on him or something relevant I'd be grateful! ♥

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