fic: R.E.M.

[leucocrystal]

TITLE:  R.E.M.
(alternate link @ AO3)
FANDOM:  Veronica Mars

SUMMARY:  Start with the gunshot on the rooftop, and work your way to the next evening.  Logan experiences some heavy dreams, chronicling his life and his relationship with Veronica.
CHARACTER(S)/PAIRING(S):  Logan's POV; Veronica, Logan/Veronica, with very brief mentions of Lilly, Cliff

Comments

[leucocrystal]

I ♥ YOU.

Seriously.

[catteo]

I absolutely love this. I love the icons, I love the pause-rewind-play, I love Logan's voice. Lovelovelove.
There were too many wonderful parts to list, but the repetitions all the way through were really beautifully done. I thought that your use of Logan dreaming was incredibly well done. I am becoming somewhat incoherent, for which I apologise.

Just one error that I noticed - the pool house (ATttD) flashback you have a "he" and I think it should say "she".

Also, I just friended you. Hope that's ok!

[leucocrystal]

I'm so relieved people are responding so well to the icon and graphics usage -- that was what I was most nervous about, since I'd never seen it in a fic before.  I'm also glad you think I captured Logan's voice -- he's not an easy character, and I really love him so I wanted to get it right.

Again, I'm so glad you thought the repetition worked, too!  I try to be careful with how I use that, and I was afraid it wouldn't work here, but I guess it did!  And the dreaming was good, too?  Success!

Also, thanks so much for pointing out the pronoun error!  That was one I didn't catch.

So yes, a huge thank you to you; I'm so glad to hear you liked it.  And no problem at all!  Welcome to the flist! :)

Wow

[ewanmax]

That's pretty much all I can say because it's pretty incredible. I'm new to Veronica Mars, and new to an obsessive addiction to Logan. You see I'd done a two day marathon of the first season (because it was a gift), and then scoured the internet for season two and you tube videos and fan fiction and icons and and and. I just couldn't let it go, I'm still hopelessly lost looking for nuances of Logan's love for Veronica. So, WOW, you gave me that and it was so amazing to go through all the different moments including before Lily died and seeing Veronica through Logan's eyes and I simply loved it.
Thank you!

Re: Wow

[leucocrystal]

How great is Logan, seriously?  Welcome to the VM and Logan Lovers Club!  I'm a definite member, lol.  Also, I love VM marathons.  Marathons of any good TV show are always a great thing.

I'm so glad you loved it -- thank you so much for reading. :)

[leucocrystal]

Thank you so much for reading, and the generous review!  I'm so happy you liked it. :)

[psykodelicteddy]

I loved, Loved, LOVED this story. It's so 'effing beautiful :D

And side note: I'm also LOVING your layout :D I miss Vision of Escaflowne.

[leucocrystal]

Thank you so much for reading!  I'm so glad to hear you liked it. :)

And thank you again!  I made this layout ages ago, but my love for Escaflowne knows no bounds, so I still like it to this day. :)