Comments | leucocrystal: Ficlet: Symbiosis

leucocrystal

Ficlet: Symbiosis

Jun 10, 2006 22:28

TITLE: Symbiosis
(alternate link @ AO3)
FANDOM: Veronica Mars

SUMMARY: There's a twisted balance; a definite pattern in their relationship, and contrary to popular belief, he sees it.
CHARACTER(S)/PAIRING(S): Logan's POV; Veronica, Logan/Veronica, with very brief mention of Lynn.
SOUNDTRACK: Nothing in particular, but America's "Ventura ( Read more... )

fanfic: vmars, tv: vmars

Comments 44

flowerings June 11 2006, 05:49:30 UTC

Very nice, and yeah... a dabble is 100 words.

leucocrystal June 12 2006, 02:52:07 UTC

Thank you! And yeah, I figured as much, because I've never written something that short, lol.

catherinebruce June 11 2006, 05:54:33 UTC

*Sighs* Honestly?

This was beautiful. Yes, it was short, but it was long enough for the story. You got across what some people would take thousands of words to say, and to me this is probably more impacting.

Anyhoo. hope I make sense. =D

leucocrystal June 13 2006, 11:48:18 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm so relieved it wasn't a disappointment!

That's very flattering that you think, despite the short length, I got across what I was going for -- thank you so much for your time and generous comment. :)

adhuri_roshni June 11 2006, 07:17:25 UTC

It's always there; just one last layer, hiding at the very bottom of them all, so small and thin he could almost forget if he didn't already know. It's got to be genetics, because he hears it in his own words, too.

He feels apology in the entire relationship; in every touch and every word.

So good! I don't think it's too short, just the right length actually. Logan's had a complicated childhood and you've really captured the complications that carries into any relationship he'll probably have.

And don't be nervous about posting more fic! :D

Sorry if this comes up twice, LJ's been wonky for me all day.

leucocrystal June 13 2006, 11:49:50 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so relieved that you enjoyed it -- I was really nervous about posting this.

No worries about LJ -- it's wonky all the time, isn't it? Thank you again for your time and generosity. :)

surrexi June 11 2006, 07:41:22 UTC

Oh, my poor angsty Logan. This is beautiful, Zellie! You capture Logan extremely well, and with an economy of words that works extremely well in this case. Sometimes less really is more, and this is an example of that. Wonderful job!

leucocrystal June 13 2006, 11:50:38 UTC

Thank you so much, sweetie! I'm flattered!

I'm so glad you think I can capture Logan well -- since he's basically my favourite character next to Veronica, that's important to me, especially considering how complex a character he is. ♥

starcinders June 11 2006, 08:42:36 UTC

My first reaction to seeing that you'd written something new was definitely a squee. :P

I was easily able to look at this as a separate piece from your first fic. I certainly enjoyed just as much. I agree that the length of this was perfect.

I guess I'm a glutton for punishment as well because I love Logan and I love it when writers are able to capture his spirit and voice. You've done it beautifully once again. :)

leucocrystal June 13 2006, 11:53:19 UTC

Aww, that's so sweet and flattering that you were happy to see I'd written something else! I'm blushing. :)

I'm really glad that it was easy to separate this piece from my first; I was a little worried about that, but hoped it was different enough, you know?

But thank you so much again for your time and thoughtfulness -- I really appreciate it. :)