FIC: Just a Bit.

[leucocrystal]

TITLE:  Just a bit.
(alternate link @ AO3)
FANDOM:  Veronica Mars
SUMMARY:  This is not happening in a supermarket.  With actual background music.
CHARACTER(S)/PAIRING(S):  Veronica's POV; Logan, Logan/Veronica, with very brief mention of Lianne.
SOUNDTRACK:  The Eurythmics' "Would I Lie To You?" and The Temptations' "I Second That Emotion" are

Comments

[afrocurl]

I really love this, especially because Ithink you really got at Veronica's issues of trusting anyone other than Keith and Wallace.

The supermarket is a truly awkward place to run into an ex (I've done it over liquor), so that whole part just rang so true.

Wonderful job!

[leucocrystal]

Aww, thank you sweetie!  I'm glad you think I managed to pull this one off -- I was definitely worried about it.

Hee, I had fun awkwarding up the supermarket.  I hadn't seen it written before, but I like taking ordinary places and putting my favourite characters in them.  Thank you, thank you! ♥

[goldenmelisande]

I love your fics, and this is no exception. It's the perfect mix of fluffy and...not fluffy, and I loved the scene in the produce aisle. I loved how you made Veronica scared of commitment and Logan clingy, because that's how I've always perceived them. Great work!

[leucocrystal]

My fics?  You love my fics?  Wow, that's really flattering, thank you so much! *blushes*

Thank you for taking the time to read and review -- it means a lot. :)

[flinkkamingo3]

I absolutely love this. The whole supermarket scene is so amusing; there's just somehting really funny about produce, I don't know what it is. And then there's just the awesomeness of Veronica finally admitting how much she loves Logan. Add the reference to Alex Mac, and you've pretty much got yourself a perfect fic. Excellent job for an excellent way to start my morning.

[leucocrystal]

Oh wow, thank you so much!  Hee, produce.  It's fun messing with the ordinary, isn't it?  I know I enjoy it, and I had a lot of fun writing this, if it isn't obvious enough already, lol.  (Whee, random references!)

Thank you again, for taking the time to read and let me know what you thought.  It means more than you know. :)

[kaosmalek]

You have no need to be nervous. This is a really beautiful and fully realized piece, and I think you've captured Veronica very well. And you have three other fics in this fandom, you say? I'm definitely going to have to look for them.
I also loved Logan's characterization here. You captured his mannerisms and his body language perfectly, and the dialogue was really very true to form. This I appreciate above all in VM fic.
Great job. I'd like to friend you, if I could, to keep track of what else you write. Feel free to friend back. :)

[leucocrystal]

Wow, thank you, that's a very flattering comment!  I do indeed have three other VM fics; just click the "fanfic" tag at the top of the entry to see the rest of them.  I look forward to hearing what you think of the rest of them!

I have a lot of fun writing for Logan, can you tell?  But that's always true of characters that I have such strong affection for; I'm just glad to hear that the extra effort I put in there for him comes across well. :)

Oh, I don't mind at all!  Friending back, and welcome to the flist!

[la623]

This was really good...really beautiful.

[leucocrystal]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read, and leave such a lovely review -- it means a lot. :)