Villanelle on Knives and Traffic

Jul 11, 2009 12:48

i can be pretty careless at times, spaced out in potentially dangerous contexts. like crossing the street, or handling knives. i've always been under the impression that i would someday get run over because i didn't look, or end up mauling myself while cutting a piece of twine. the following villanelle is and attempt to express this lifelong ( Read more... )

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arielbasom July 14 2009, 05:17:08 UTC
I just learned that villanelles are meant to be in iambic pentameter..

I am going to alter mine, what you do with yours is um... up to you.

Hope you are enjoying your life of carelessness.

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leuschner July 14 2009, 16:31:53 UTC
this one is inspired by iambic pentameter.

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arielbasom July 14 2009, 20:34:58 UTC
lol lol lol l

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