Touching

[lexiael]

Your breath between my breasts
Tender kisses down my spine
Your tongue so sweet
it crosses right over my line.

Sweet talk me without words
Your touch and taste are curling
like smoke around
my tongue, sensations dervish-whirling.

Should I reverse them...?

Comments

[drunkenpunchup]

Hum yes, I think so...the first one is so much more sensuous, and saving that for last might be good.

I like it.

[lexiael]

Yeah, probably.... it's just, I wrote the other one first and therefore some part of me wants to keep it that way. I also like it better. *sigh* Ah well.

Thank you, I like it too *grins* although the real thing's better.

K