Ok, the editing on this chapter took WAY longer than it should have because I kept adding stuff, lol. But I think I've finally got it just about parfait. So...omg just post it you loser.
You sure did keep adding stuff, tis one of the longest chapters I remember ^__^
- But it was still good, a few wrong words, but I know you will fix them later. Anyways, woohoo! for a fight :D and a bit of revealing some more of the story . . . but still not completely clear. And I must say that I like his dad, even though he's not a "nice" character in the stor.
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- But it was still good, a few wrong words, but I know you will fix them later. Anyways, woohoo! for a fight :D and a bit of revealing some more of the story . . . but still not completely clear. And I must say that I like his dad, even though he's not a "nice" character in the stor.
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What do you like about his dad? He is pretty interesting, I just want to know what other people think of my characters.
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