Thirty Girls

Aug 25, 2009 02:19

Title: Thirty Girls
Author: Lhuneldaiel
Characters: Fernando Gago, Gonzalo Higuaín, Cristiano Ronaldo, mentions of Sergio Ramos and Ezequiel Lavezzi.
Rating: R- for language and mention of men's dangly bits and girl parts.
Word count: 790 words.
Summary: Gonzalo gets dragged into one of Fernando's sly manipulations, when an unsuspecting Cristiano ( Read more... )

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izzy505 August 25 2009, 22:46:00 UTC
Before I comment on the fic I wanted to apologize for being such a shitty friend. I feel so bad for not commenting on a lot of your posts lately. I hate using work as an excuse but it has been sucking the energy right out of me to the point where the only thing I'm up for is lurking and a comment here and there ( ... )

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lhuneldaiel August 25 2009, 23:16:47 UTC
Sweetie, don't apologise. I haven't been commenting much lately either, we both work hard and retail is a bitch! You're not a shitty friend, please don't say that!!!

As soon as I saw this though I had to make it a point to comment because your my favourite fic writer and I know you love the feedback.
*hugs you so hard* thank you for that, it means a lot to me! It's inspiring &hearts

I love using real life stuff, makes it more intriguing ;-)
You didn't know about the 30 girls rumour? There was a party at a club in Fer and Pocho's honour (why, did they get engaged? j/k) and at one point, Fer went into a private room with 30 girls. At that point, he was also dating three girls at the same time, the little minx.

You know how I love to write banter, and I should write more between Fer and Gonza because they just crack me up. LOL, 'the big dick club', I bet Sergio would be up for it.

When we were in Munich, I promised crazy_girl_86 that I'd write her some Gonza/Cris one day, and this is a start I guess. But Fer wanted in, LOL, and after this entry... )

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izzy505 August 26 2009, 00:36:25 UTC
I knew you'd understand. I don't think people realize how draining retail is. We work hard for little money, long hours and we deal with some really stupid customers.

I heard a little bit about the 30 girls rumour but not the details.

There was a party at a club in Fer and Pocho's honour (why, did they get engaged? j/k)LMAO!!! Did you read that Pocho and Fer got called up for the Argentina v. Brazil match. I wonder what kind of trouble they can get themselves into this time. Although I can't see it being as epic as 30 girls ( ... )

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txorakeriak August 26 2009, 16:35:39 UTC
Mmmmmmmmmmmh. Wow, that was delicious! Their banter is just priceless, and I LOVE the atmosphere! Dude, the thought of these three under the showers, having that kind of conversation, and Gonzalo playing along to Gago even though he has no clue where it will all lead, and Cris in a tight spot, undecided between laughing it all off and proving his masculinity... Who needs 30 girls when you can have these three? :D

FANTASTIC.

Oh, and strangely enough my favourite part was when Gonzalo stretched out his palm to get some body wash. I can't explain why, it's just utterly awesome to picture that! Closely followed by Gonzalo freaking out when Gago pushed his ass against his dick... XD Gago does enjoy freaking him out, doesn't he? XDDD And I love it!

What an utterly awesome story! Totally adding this to memories. :D

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lhuneldaiel August 31 2009, 23:59:56 UTC
Hahaha, glad you liked it! It was a bit weird to include Cris, but I guess that was inevitable after he whored around like mad lately at RM, and Gonzalo seems to have a crush on him.

Gonzalo playing along to Gago even though he has no clue where it will all lead, and Cris in a tight spot, undecided between laughing it all off and proving his masculinity...
I love writing Gonzalo, he's so precious. Gago is always a delight, with all his schemes and manipulations, and it was fun to write Cris because he's so cocky.

Oh, and strangely enough my favourite part was when Gonzalo stretched out his palm to get some body wash. I can't explain why, it's just utterly awesome to picture that!
Maybe because that's the moment you realise he's just as shameless as the rest, and they're all going to have a nice wank for the sake of male bonding XD
Gago loves to freak him out, hahaha!

Thank you for your lovely comment! *mwah*

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