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[lhuneldaiel]

Title: On a Hot Summer Day...
Author: Lhuneldaiel
Characters: Fernando Gago, Pedro León
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 356 words.
Summary: Pedro feels hot. Fernando has ice water.
Disclaimer: I'm pretty sure this never ever happened anywhere but in my pervy little mind.
Special thanks to: jennis_footie for putting me up to this.

Comments are much appreciated.

Comments

[izzy505]

SQUEEE!!! I was hoping you would make a fic with them!

GUH! I love how Pedro is so unaware of how much he is turning Fer on. I really hope you plan on writing more of them because after reading this I want more. LOL. Seriously, you can't just leave it there!

[lhuneldaiel]

OMG ICON *snags*

Hahaha, Pedro has no clue --- yet. I'd love to write some more, but have to get to know his character first, see what he tells me... he's still a bit shy *g*

[izzy505]

I thought you'd like that one. ;D

LOL, poor Fer. Whenever you figure out what character Pedro will be I can't wait to read it.

[lhuneldaiel]

OMFG YOU ARE TRYING TO KILL ME WITH YOUR ICONS!!!

I do have a feeling they get along, him and Fer. I can't wait to write about them hahaha!

[sophiamoon]

Love, love the suggestiveness of this.

[lhuneldaiel]

Thank you! I always love it when one character is completely unaware that the other is drooling over him ;-)

[just_jenni]

This is amazing. I love how you've lengthened it.
It makes me feel really dirty, in a good way, which is hot so I love it. :P
Of course I feel bad for encouraging these two to behave all naughty with each other when Serg isn't around. But seriously, there is no way this wasn't a beautiful, slashy accident just waiting to happen as soon as these two laid eyes on each other. I have to wonder if Pedro didn't get the 'heads up' on Gago from Miguelito. XD

Anyway, this fic is great. Just what the doctor ordered in this incessantly hot weather. I love how Fer pours his water on himself and then gives Pedro an impromptu shower. The description of Pedro, from the 'unruly curls' (GUHH) to the 'countours of his muscles' and 'the effect the sudden wetness had on his nipples' was vividly sensual and delightful.

I needed this. I loved this. Thank you for expanding on the original idea! XDDDD

[lhuneldaiel]

Thank you! You were my Muse for this one ♥

I know, it does make you feel a little dirty, huh? I also feel bad for wanting slashy moments between Fer and Pedro when Sergie isn't around, but who knows... Maybe they've found a new playmate *bites hand*

Thanks, I am so happy you like the extended version! Like I said, it's a bit like the typical guy fantasy of two hot chciks playing with a water hose on a warm day.

The description of Pedro, from the 'unruly curls' (GUHH) to the 'countours of his muscles' and 'the effect the sudden wetness had on his nipples' was vividly sensual and delightful.
He is sinful, really.

♥

[bergusia]

Aww, that was so cute. And water games (Or should we call it "Water Bottle Training Session Porn"?), who could resist them, eh?

[lhuneldaiel]

Aww, thank you! Can't resist water games on a hot day ;-)

[titania_torres]

mmmm porn indeed.
quite the image that provided =)

[lhuneldaiel]

Hahaha, thank you! The boys provided the kick off, all I had to do was write what happened next ;-)