Love and Rainbows

[li7h]

The light switch clicks several times. Nothing. Like a scared animal he descends, ready to bolt from the blackness at a sound. The maglite illumines the bottom of the stairs; pistol crossed over, follows the beam

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[nose_enterprise]

I really quite enjoyed this - but... why did he top himself?

and did you mean "Walken" sounds like the sort of behaviour we've come to expect from Christopher Walken, maybe a line of dialogue such as "Have you ever... touched, a goat's penis? ...It's CRAZY" would clarify it as chris walken.

[li7h]

I was shooting for "Crikey, I'm quite scared and I don't have many bullets left so I'm going to shoot myself in the head"