One Piece fic-PoSM, Chapter 16

[liashi]

Title: The Psychology of a Shattered Mind
Chapter Title: Adrift
Rating: PG-13/M
Characters: Usopp, Nami, OCs
Word Count: About 4.9k

Warnings: Disturbing imagery, implications of non-con/dub-con, and violence. Angsty Usopp and blatant excuse for nakama comfort. This will be intense. Possible spoilers for entire series. AU, jumps off from Usopp being

Comments

[printfogey]

*bites nails* AAAAHHH, it feels like every chapter ups the ante even more!! The fic has gotten to almost isufferably strong tension/anxiety levels. Well done. Well doen indeed! You must have done an awful lot of plot planning on this story. *is very impressed*

I took the liberty of pimping this fic on Tumblr, btw (using the ffnet link as it wasn't up on LJ yet). It so deserves to get more attention.

(This is where I realise I'm in dire need of an icon that says "scared out of my wits".)

[liashi]

*smirk which changes to nervous cough* Eek, well I certainly hope later parts can live up to the build-up, then. Lol. I thought I was answering some questions with this chapter but I guess answering questions isn't quite the same as resolving conflicts. XD;

Well, the events of the plot on a large scale have been outlined for a while, in my head anyway ... It's the intervening scenes and smaller details that slow me down because I'm indecisive on what to put until I'm soundly frustrated by the resultant writer's block. Thus what's in my head as point A to B ends up becoming more like points A through G and takes longer to write than I thought it would.

Aw, thanks for the pimpage~ It doesn't matter to me which link you used. :)