Somebody's Watching, Somebody's Waiting - Part 2

[liberty_stewart]

Title: Somebody’s Watching, Somebody’s Waiting

Fandom: Criminal Minds

Pairing: Jennifer Jareau/Maggie Lowe

Disclaimer: Criminal Minds is property of CBS and I don’t own anything.

Rating: PG

Summary/Spoilers: This is a retelling of the episode ‘Somebody’s Watching’. The BAU team is on the hunt for a killer stalking an actress. Meanwhile Jennifer Jareau

Comments

[wkgreen]

Thanks for the heads up! Nicely done. :)

[ttandme69]

I cannot wait to see how Maggie is going to get out of this one!

[shoot_the_photo]

Nice... progressing really well. I've only just recently seen the episode again but this is just such a different take on it... can't wait for the next installment

[liberty_stewart]

Did you see the episode on TV or did you follow the link I posted in part 1? I take it you remember how the team finally managed to suspect Maggie after all their dead leads? Well a little spoiler here but the next two parts are going to have a small tweak in the actual episode that's going to change the progression of the case.

I'm glad you like my take on the story. It's based on an actual episode, so I couldn't go for the suprise twist route. And really since the story is going to be focused a lot on JJ, Maggie and Lila, that would be impossible. Best route to go would be to focus on the aspects we didn't see in the episode. Like more info on Maggie and the knowledge where was JJ throughout the episode.

[shoot_the_photo]

DVD actually :)
Now I'm going to have to go back and watch it again! And now you're just teasing... hope you are posting the next installment real soon!

[liberty_stewart]

While you're checking out the episode, keep an eye out for how similiar scenes that made it into this story that are taken out of the episode are. You won't believe how many times I had to watch a scene in order to get the dialogue right.

Parts 3 and 4 are going to be posted next week. The reason is posted in the comments of part 1.