Somebody's Watching, Somebody's Waiting - Part 7

[liberty_stewart]

Title: Somebody’s Watching, Somebody’s Waiting

Fandom: Criminal Minds

Pairing: Jennifer Jareau/Maggie Lowe

Disclaimer: Criminal Minds is property of CBS and I don’t own anything.

Rating: PG

Summary/Spoilers: This is a retelling of the episode ‘Somebody’s Watching’. The BAU team is on the hunt for a killer stalking an actress. Meanwhile Jennifer

Comments

[wkgreen]

Hmmm... girls are jumping head first now. Interesting that Maggie is calmed down by JJ's presence. Your pacing is getting better and conversations are flowing smoother. :) Keep up the good work and waiting for next chapter. :)

[liberty_stewart]

Thank you. Though do you think I kind of rushed the relationship a bit? I'm pretty certain it's still a lot more believable than how JJ/Will and especially Lila/Reid got together, but hmmm... I want a comment on this one.

About Maggie being calmed by JJ's presence, I actually have an explanation for it, which kind of does make sense if you think about it. But I don't know, should I trust my readers to piece it together, or should I explain it in the story?