Four Days, One Room - Day One A

[liberty_stewart]

Well there are these two Canadian gals that I'm really liking at the moment, so much so that I felt there must be at least one fic with them in it. I was opting for someone to write the story, but after not much takers, I decided what the heck? Just write it yourself. The two women in question are Andrea Joy Cook, better known as Jennifer Jareau

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[love_besos]

Interesting start, though you might want to space things out more, so that it isn't a block of text to read. I frequently find I do the same and it makes it much easier to read with more spaces in between paragraph breaks, or ideas with similar concepts, etc.