Four Days, One Room - Day One B

Jun 04, 2009 14:59


Title: Four Days, One Room

Fandom: House/Criminal Minds

Pairing: Eve Carter/Jennifer Jareau

Disclaimer: I don't own anything from House or Criminal Minds.

Rating: PG

Summary/Spoilers: An STD patient and rape victim copes with her turmoil through a special friendship she develops with a certain FBI agent. This is a retelling of the House episode ‘ ( Read more... )

house, crossover, criminal minds

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geekgrrllurking June 5 2009, 18:06:57 UTC
Hey, this broke down into two parts ok! Good stuff, but then I may have already mentioned that before ;)

Can't wait for the next part!

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liberty_stewart June 5 2009, 19:17:11 UTC
Surprising isn't it? Now I just have to wait for other people to comment. New couples usually take a while to build up, so I should give it a few days.

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steppenwolf_20 March 13 2010, 00:48:36 UTC
Hi there!
I know this comment comes rather late, but I only now had the chance to start reading it.

Okay I like the story thus far, you did a great job bringing JJ into the mix. And I think Eve's reaction to someone else being hurt worse then she herself was (or differently hurt) is quite believable.
I'm looking forward to reading the next days!

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liberty_stewart March 13 2010, 01:28:53 UTC
Why hello steppenwolf! I'm rather flattered you're reading my stories.

Glad you're liking the story so far. Did you see the original "One Day, One Room" House episode? I got to say though, it gets pretty cluttered at Day Four B. I tried to format it properly, but Livejournal won't give me anymore space, so it ends up looking like a big block of text.

Let me know what you think once you're finished the story.

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steppenwolf_20 March 13 2010, 21:39:56 UTC
Yes, I know the ep. I even rewatched it in preparation to read your story *g*

I try to read as much stories as possible, sadly I'm way behind, because I wasn't online much for almost 10 months.

I'll make sure to let you know what I think at the end of each day.

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liberty_stewart March 13 2010, 22:32:20 UTC
That's cool. I'll be looking forward to your reviews.

It always helps when the readers know well in advance who the lesser known character is.

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