Somebody's Watching, Somebody's Waiting - Part 18 (Finale)

[liberty_stewart]

Title: Somebody’s Watching, Somebody’s Waiting

Fandom: Criminal Minds

Pairing: Jennifer Jareau/Maggie Lowe

Disclaimer: Criminal Minds is property of CBS and I don’t own anything.

Rating: PG

Summary/Spoilers: This is a retelling of the episode ‘Somebody’s Watching’. The BAU team is on the hunt for a killer stalking an actress. Meanwhile Jennifer Jareau

Comments

[wkgreen]

Very nice ending. :) I really enjoyed how this story played out. :)

Thanks for sharing. :)

[liberty_stewart]

Glad you enjoyed it. Now you know why I added "Somebody's Waiting" to the title of this fic.

The good part is that now I can pretend this was the episode, instead of that garbage that I saw on TV. Yeah I know this messes up certain canon regarding the show, but the parts of the series it leaves no chance of happening, I don't think anyone minds that being removed from the series. You know what I'm talking about.

BTW wkgreen, since I know you read both my Criminal Minds stories, I got two things to ask you.

1. Which did you thought was the better retelling episode? "Four Days, One Room" or "Somebody's Watching, Somebody's Waiting"?

2. Which Katheryn character did you like more? Eve Carter or Maggie Lowe? Both weren't explored that much, but still gave me enough to work with and expand the character.

[wkgreen]

Hmm... can't really say which is better. They both expanded the characters and storylines in ways that were interesting to me. But they are like apples and oranges. I know that isn't really helpful. If something else pops to mind, I will fire it over.

[liberty_stewart]

Glad you liked it. If it means people can ignore what they saw on TV and pretend this is what happened instead, I'm more than happy to share.

Oh I know what you mean about the actual episode. I felt insulted by that whole episode. The very first scene had a character (I don't even think they bothered to give her a name LOL) with no other purpose than to show she's a incestuous person with the hots for old men aka Hollywood's image of a lesbian! Turns out her real purpose is to give an idea of the standard for the rest of the episode.

Only good thing that came from that episode was letting me know Katheryn at least had the decency to drop the Lila role and go for the role with an actual lesbian. I don't care if she was the unsub. I rather root for her than the fake "lesbians" the episode gave us.

[mayireadtoday]

This was a very interesting fic and I enjoyed it.

[liberty_stewart]

I wasn't even aware you were checking out my LJ let alone reading my stories. You enjoyed the story. Did you like the characters and/or the pairing?

[mayireadtoday]

Both.

[liberty_stewart]

I'm wondering, how long have you been reading this story? Are you a fast reader or have you been reading this for a while?