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[librae]

Title: Sapera
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Rating: G
A/N: Written for the healing challenge at contrelamontre.

Comments

[darknightjess]

You captured Sirius's love and need to make things right beautifully!
Very lovely!

[librae]

thank you for reading. :)

[penknife]

Aww. They're cute. Dear Sirius.

[librae]

thanks for reading!
i like your icon.

[shatterglass]

I see you've got a flame. -grins- You should use it for something. Toasting marshmellows?

I loved it. A very soothing feel, a nice read, carries you through. Mmm. ♥

[librae]

my very first flame, too!
pity, though, i don't think the flame was big enough to light a stick of incense, much less toast a marshmallow.

thank you. :D

[mintyfreshsocks]

It was indeed a weak one. *pities you* He wrote ass as "a**". . . how sad. One's first flame should be something ugly and nasty and absolutely vitrolic, not with something with censored swear words.

By the way, your fic was wonderful. I love the fact that it's both very light and cute, and at the same time it does show the unbalance that is Sirius - the desire for everything to be right, his disregard, and his rather tragic sense of humor. It read like J.K.'s Sirius, so grand job!

[librae]

i mean, god, am i not worth a real flame? honestly!

and thanks for reading! i'm glad you read other things in to it besides the surface-cutesy. i'd hate to have my jeen-yuss go unnoticed. ;)

[bronzeskin]

Oh my god, dude, that rivir chick doesn't know what she's talking about.

Which isn't surprising, because she admits to loving HP smut.

And this is anything but. It's subtle and tender, and it showcases the bond S/R have. The kind that's pure instead of the wild-fanon-smuttiness.

[librae]

rivir signed the comment "jacob." :D although the account is supposedly shared by two people.

and danke, nate. :)
i like wild-fanon-smuttiness. GOOD wild smuttiness. trouble is there's hardly any out there ("unrequited love, fumbling admission, generic, poorly-written sex, BOOM" doesn't quite work for me). and i don't/can't/don't know how/am afraid to write it. i m n evol ho.

[bronzeskin]

Hmm. Potter smutfic. I've read a really good one. By, um, I don't remember by whom.

OH WAIT. I read a really nice one filled with unresolved sexual tension. Sigh. I love UST. For me, it's way better than smut.

Them not doing it is a zillion times sexier than them doind it.

[librae]

Them not doing it is a zillion times sexier than them doind it.

you know, it's really odd. before i ever discovered beatles slash (and god, did i ever want to discover it), i read a whole hell of a lot of gen. that stuff was just as poorly written as most of the slash out there today, but i enjoyed it because it managed to be more homoerotic than the majority of fics i've read in which john and paul are blowing each other. if you can believe it. :D

i love love love ust, only i hardly ever find any.
and i prefer for there to be explosive sequels. IFYAKNOWWHATIMEAN.

[willowmyst]

heehee
talk talk talk

[librae]

thanks for reading!