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[librae]

Title: Undone
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Frank doesn't know it, but it's all his fault.
A/N: HAPPY BIRTHDAY, anniesj! FYI, the Annie-Needs-Porn-Ficathon can be found here.

It was supposed to be about 2600 words shorter. Whups.

Comments

praise

[anonymous]

I'm a stranger here, not even aware who the characters are, but this sure was wonderful. You got any more like it? Good writing, and hot, too.

Re: praise

[librae]

Hi, stranger. Thanks for stopping by. :) I have more fic on this journal but none quite like this. This is my first descent into pr0n, after all. :P

Re: praise

[fadagaski]

Your first? *big mushy puddle of goo*

Re: praise

[librae]

Yar, 'tis. :)

[blacksatinrose]

I have never read a pr0n that made me blush before.

And you know, for a minute I feeeeered the James/Sirius, but YAY I WAS SAVED and you rule and I'd be more coherent if I weren't still blushing.

[librae]

Ever read switchknife? Holy God. Seriously blushworthy porn there.

That said, oooohhappy. :)

BLUSH.

[blacksatinrose]

I have not read Switchknife! But dammit, you are clearly the wonderwoman of writing, because BLUSHING. FIRST PR0N. BLUSHING.

O_o

(LIVEJOURNAL IS BAD TODAY! *shakes a fist at it*

[darkeyedwolf]

sw;kjriueKLJSHW

LOVE. LOOOOOOOOVE

Good God, I am friending this motherfucker immediately if all your fics are like this. <3333!

Three emoticons in one comment. How low I have sunk!

[librae]

They aren't. :(
At least they're not porny, anyway.

But all my fics, coincidentally, are by me, so that should count for something. :P

:D, by the way. ♥

[odycee]

a;sldkfja;sldkfj

...

Oh my god. That was so deliciously... filthy. I am DEAD. And that's a good thing.

I realised that I have lykaios friended but not you here.

*goes to rectify the situation*

[librae]

I am really really glad someone would describe it as such. ("Filthy.") Because, well...

Yeah!

Didn't want my first attempt at pr0n to be too vanilla.

Thankoo. :)

[odycee]

It was hot. HOT. And pervy. And filthy. I applaud your first pr0n attempt and I am now going to pimp it.

[odycee]

a;sldkfja;lskdjf;alsdkjfa;

[gaeta]

he knew Remus could see everything, every pulsing vein and every path his fingers stroked, up and down his length over and over, circling the base, thumbing his slit and the purpling head. Remus could see the shining creases in his palm wet with sweat and the milky precome and see his other hand as it dipped lower, down between his legs until his fingers brushed his hole. Sirius worked them in tight little circles around the ring; he'd never done it before but he ached there now,

If this is really your first p-rn, or for that matter, even if it's not, that is remarkably hot -- Sirius is so sensual and so totally into Remus watching.

[lykaios]

'Tis my first. There've been pornish things going on in my other fics, and by that I mean there's a two-sentence-long sex scene scattered here and there, all of which are terribly stimulating, I'm sure. :P

Thanks!