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Nov 21, 2004 14:30

where we go
sirius/remus, g, 235 whole words

All the things he doesn't know are floating around his head like air, like breeze. He doesn't know where he misplaced his book or the intention behind his letters to Harry (he has to walk away from the desk and leave the quill dotting purple in the margins, because he doesn't know what he's trying to ( Read more... )

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blacksatinrose November 21 2004, 20:15:41 UTC
<3

Your writing makes me wail and cling to the beauty.

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librae November 21 2004, 20:58:02 UTC
Hi. :)
Good.
Thanks.

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I don't believe in the sun... ex_stateline124 November 21 2004, 20:37:21 UTC
Mmmalksdjfkasgahack. OW. For such a short piece, it's sure knows how to punch.

The end does not exist.

Because Sirius isn't really dead Oh, Remus. :(

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Re: I don't believe in the sun... librae November 21 2004, 20:59:23 UTC
Huh. It didn't mean to punch you, honest!

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august_snow November 21 2004, 20:53:04 UTC
The end does not exist.

That hurts. For such a short piece, it really hurts. :(

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librae November 21 2004, 20:57:37 UTC
Oh bugger. I think that means I've failed miserably, then. :P

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shatterglass November 21 2004, 21:06:18 UTC
Mmmm.

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librae November 21 2004, 21:07:47 UTC
Hmmm?

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orange_crushed November 21 2004, 21:20:00 UTC
"Maybe he is, and maybe there is."

Nice. So nice. I love your Remus, drifing around like a leaf. The writing is very smooth, and the characterization is even better.

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librae November 21 2004, 21:22:05 UTC
Thank you!

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